|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|A vision of loveliness penned well|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Lovely poem Jessica, I'm going to make sure you're around to write me more. GEM|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Such a lovely poem to read this morning!
|Reviewed by Linda Murray
|Your poem has been written like a painter paints. Wonderfully!!! I like the way you incoperated your colors and words. Very different.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Very good. I enjoyed reading.|
|Reviewed by Toris Okotie
|"and you kiss me tenderly
before we're off to paint another day"
Love this verses.
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|"we're off to paint another day in the masterpiece" Lovely painting indeed!|
|Reviewed by Lee Ennis
|and shade of sad Grey
used to dwell
"before the kalidescopic
essence of you
painted my soul"