Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!


Featured Authors:  Sara Russell, iAntoine Raphael, iRichard Orey, iWill Clark, ial squitieri,sr, iDr. Ronald Bissell, iDerek Flower, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Marilyn Seray

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 248 Titles
· 3,994 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
Member Since: Before 2003

Marilyn Seray, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.

Featured Book
by Liana Margiva

Is it truly better to have lost love than to never to have loved at all? Author Liana Margiva has written this collection of poems and short stories to explore the questi..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members

Butterfly ~
by Marilyn Seray
Not rated by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by Marilyn Seray
•  Platinum
•  MADNess
•  Pearls
•  Rain Symphony
•  Happy Shadows
           >> View all 246

Good morning sun,
Are you ready for
a brand new day…

I was taught to soar
ever so graceful
over the grass to wake
them with a gentle breeze.

The breeze vibratos
delicate harp music
through the blades of
grass and wakes nature.

I am soundless as
I land on the edge of
a morning glory to
bathe in a crystal

When I am finished I
tickle its softness
with my delicate feet
to give a last call for
all to greet the sun

“Wake up sleepy heads”

The lilacs promised me
that I could sample their
scent today, if I dropped
in for sweet nectar tea

I was taught proper
visiting etiquette and
told not to overstay my
welcome, so I shall take

Down below a sun-dressed
cherub is trying to catch
me but I spin circles around
her head

Hmm…so sweet

The sun is high now, and
time to meet my beau for
lunch in a quiet garden of
tall flowers.

I see him approaching. Oh,
how I love him and the way
his regal colors soar through
the blue sky

A kiss lighter than us before
we dine
His choices; so succulent

Then,from above I see our shadows
in a bed of impatients and watch as
he wraps his wings around mine

© Copyright MS

Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!

Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
I look back and see how you would tell a story with that crazed nearly haphazard flight that would take me away...I love being there
Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
Beautiful and I love the pretty picture image as well! Again thanks for the share!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
So pretty and delightful. Enjoy your pen...
Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce

This is such a lovely write! I don't know why I hadn't seen this before.

Welcome back to AD!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk
Butterfly, an exceptional piece.

God Bless You,
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

When I am finished I
tickle its softness
with my delicate feet
to give a last call for
all to greet the sun .... l o v e i t. Butterflies are delightful,
and so is your colorful and slyly witty and succulent offering
to them. . (: and us :) 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
This has the lightness of a whisper, the beauty of a pageant and the finesse of a work of art as it moves effortlessly from stanza to stanza. I love the sense of innocence and yet sensuality, too. A lovely write, Marilyn, thank you. Kate x
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
well done
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
I love to welcome the sun every morning I see it, or even a little rain once in a while. Lovely uplifting write Marilyn. Thanks always for your comments. Your a dear Lady.
Reviewed by jude forese
a very beautiful, uplifting poem! rejuvenated my synapses...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Music, image and wonderful orchestration of words all come together to form a piece of perfection. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Augh sweet Miss Seray...I speak to the Monarchs and their voice comes back inside of your poetry. The poor Monarchs are surely doomed with the foretell of colder weather coming to their home south of the US. I read of this just yesterday. My heart is full with the flutter of their wings and the struggle they will endure. Your words are strength. Thank you.
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
Lovely soft write dear... Please do more! ;0
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Marilyn, this is surely the nicest poem that I've read tonight. BTW, I love your autumn colors on your bio-page. It really puts me in the mood for that harvest moon.

Love, Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Lovely imageries indeed!...and I love the butterfly in the picture.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
“Wake up sleepy heads”
Indeed you have woken me up with this piece..wonderfully written ty

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Marilyn this is exceptional...I adore butterflys and have many flowers that draw them into my garden.....this was beautiful...floria
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Absolutely adorable, Marilyn.. Glad to see you back. (means pc is worling well again right?)
Glad info was useful..
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
This poem absolutely flutters on wings of delight!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
"a lighter kiss than us" Ahhhh, Marilyn, I floated right into this, left the room, soared! How could anyone not fly when reading this, a complete 'smile' of a poem. I'm a bit giddy.. feels wonderful! Thank you for this. katy.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Lovely and a good reminder not to take small things for granted. thanks GEM
Reviewed by Buddy Angel
What a glorious write

Reviewed by Digital Fairy
M'lady Marilyn, this poem may well rival all others for soul touching beauty, in words and art!

Brilliant write :)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was so lovely! I loved this wonderful poem so much,

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Oh Marilyn, this is wonderful. So soft and descriptive, made me wish I could fly!
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Whimsical, magical, enchanting and a delight to read. This is gorgeous, Marilyn.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Sooooooooo beautiful've a rare gift indeed.....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Truly a masterpiece.
Reviewed by Patrick Talty
Dear Marilyn,
I read this poem several times to delight again and again in the appreciation of its theme, your approach to the writing of it, and how the thought, feeling, verse form all join to form a singular richness of impact.

I don't know whether you intended the poem to be read on more than one level. For me, though, it DOES operate on the levels of the literal and the symbolic.

The free verse form is perfect for the work and, all in all, I would classify this as a poem of simple elegance which, like all good poetry, evokes thoughts, feelings and emotions similar (I imagine) to those which inspired it.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Marilyn...this is a lovely write - very whimsical and full of delight. ~Trish~
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Absolutley beautiful Marilyn!!
A pure delight!!

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Every day is a beautiful day. Fine work.
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Now this write was an absolute delight to read! Loved it! :)
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Excellent poetry.
Reviewed by Linda Murray
Butterful romance, I just love it. A very unique concept. So romantic a kiss lighter than us.!!!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Very outstanding sweet n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Absolutley beautiful Marilyn

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Beautiful. I personally think if you aren't happy to see the sun come up each and every day, there is something seriously wrong with your life. Bravo on a fine work.
Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)
I can watch them forever, so beautiful and fragile, this was one terrific write that left me feeling good with memories of my own. Well done.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
I love butterflies! This is beautiful Marilyn.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
Wonderful imagery in this ... butterflies are amazing creatures!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
This gives the reader the feeling of flight. Great write.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
So very lovely write! Enjoyed this indeed!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by E T Waldron
This whimsical magical write is pure delight,I love it, I feel renewed;-)Thank you Marilyn!
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  You Can Have Me
  2.  Petrichor
  3.  Love... Each Day
  4.  Gypsy
  5.  Soul Mates
  6.  Porcelain Clay
  7.  Blind, Deaf and Thoughtless
  8.  'The real me'
  9.  No Cardinal Sin
  10.  Mother Nature's Lesson

Taste of Hanshan (Cold Mountain) by Alexander Goldstein

Han Shan and Shi De are two inseparable characters in the history of Chan Buddhism, forming one of the most favourite subjects of Oriental fine arts: Shi De is often pictured with ..  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us

Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.