|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
I do this sometimes too. "A work in progress" Like, I will not be satisfied and put it out there for what it is and then have a look at it a few days later and say "OK what is it that I wanted to tell and show and make people feel here" I think this is good but I am one who ALWAYS picks my stuff apart on a continual basis. I just be careful because I don't want to change the meaning of what I wanted to say.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|I could use one about now. [smiles] Well done.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Love the "births of emotions" line. Great job.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|It is always nice when this happens, being creative and interchanging soul verse. The world is a happier place when there are poets. Good write indeed!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$