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Take all That I Have
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

Thursday, May 15, 2003

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Boo Hoo, No sketch this time.
My wife and I have had a few problems of late.
Something silly caused something serious to happen. We can work it out if we try.


Take all that I have
give me all that you had

Go again and hide in your selfish world
for myself; I will give until I have no more

When your luck runs out again
you can always find help from me

Back on your feet again, but
little by little, back to your selfish ways

How can you not understand?
greed and you are not your friend

All the things you hold dear
Will not survive the trip to heaven, nor
extinguish those flames in hell

Someday I hope for you
to leave yourself and give to others.

Use me again forever and always
you’ve never lost that path to my door.

Ron Axelson
©5/16/03
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Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 5/23/2003
Great expression in this, Ron...
Hope all is resolved by now--sure know how it is from my honey's and my experiences!! Sometimes it's better we get a little space from each other...but not tooooo long!!
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 5/23/2003
Good luck, cuzz...sorry...
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 5/23/2003
Hope it all works out...I'm sure it will.
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta 5/18/2003
Sorry about all of your tourmoil. It seems many of us are going through storms of the heart.
Reviewed by Cynthia Pagliolo (Reader) 5/18/2003
Ron,
A well done piece that is filled with emotion, both on bitter and sadness. Hope all works out. I love the hands wringing out the money! Well done!
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 5/18/2003
(((BIG HUGS RON))) I hope that it all works out.

Love, JC xoxoxo
Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader) 5/17/2003
Blessings my friend,,good work,,Charlie
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/16/2003
Hope you find a way back to each other's hearts.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/16/2003
I hope you two can work it out, such a sad and moving poem,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 5/16/2003
awwww, (((Ron))) so sorry to hear this. The poem is sad and (for lack of a better word)"doormat-ish" but that's what love will do.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/16/2003
(((RON))) *tears* so much raw emotion contained within this poem...you give and give and give until you can't give no more...just try...don't give up...i hope things between you and your wife work out...e-mail me if you wanna talk...i'll listen...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/16/2003
Wonderful write, (((Ron)))
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 5/16/2003
Awwww Sketchman I really hope for the best for you and your Mrs. This is a cute write! :O)
~NIkki~
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/16/2003
hope it will work out between you and your wife. you are both in my prayers! god bless you, my talented friend! (((HUGS))) :(
Reviewed by Digital Fairy 5/16/2003
Hang in there buddy, it'll be a-okay :)

Nice poem.

--Karissa
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 5/16/2003
Beautiful poem, hope all will be well.
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 5/16/2003
Ron,
I hope it all works out for you, marriage can be so difficult at times.

Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Trixie Love 5/16/2003
GM Ron,
Love this one...

Excellent write...

Trixie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/16/2003
Why did you have to blabbbb "my" history on "your" page...geez this is so familiar it could be my write.....very well done Ron...(vas byt broer)that means "hold on brother" ...very good write....Use me again forever and always
you’ve never lost that path to my door

Love Tinka
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 5/16/2003

I loved the image here though. Your sketches are something else. If we did not have ups and downs just think how boring and uneventful our lives would be. Everything happens for a reason....Prayers for you 2...Tersa
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 5/16/2003
Ahh this I understand.. as I am always the one giving it seems.. there is never enough.. Emotionally, financially.. In every way posable.. Yet I still love them.. Even in their selfish ways..
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 5/16/2003
I hope you two will manage to sort it out Ron. God bless you, my friend!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/15/2003
Good luck, Ron. Most people discard relationships too easily when the going gets rough. It's good to see you working things out. Bravo. Cute poem. Keep smiling.
Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/15/2003
I'm sure it will all work out. Nice write.
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