by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Saturday, May 17, 2003
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I feel anger, savage yearning,
thoughts unborn should rise up free.
I feel hunger, sighted learning,
wings ablaze need bear the weight.
I see fire, ravenous burning,
visions bright that strive to be.
Living pyre, creative turning,
shooting sparks into my fate.
I am fervor, fierceness churning,
combusting words to energy.
Flame survivor, soul discerning,
feverish, I detonate…
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|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
|Tyger, tyger, burning bright,
In the forest of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
could frame thy fearful symmetry?
I think he would have appreciated this poem!
|Reviewed by Julie Gaskins
Peace & Blessings
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
a powerful piece here that heals..Writers heal as they write..
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|an excellent write Erin
|Reviewed by jude forese
|kaboom! ;) excellent imagery...|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Erin, Thanks for the explosion. I will pick up your pieces and put them back together.:)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Ditto...Erin, a gem.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I felt your restless yearning in this excellent poem!!|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|So powerful, I felt your restless yearning in this excellent poem, I liked this one very much!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A powerful piece, Erin and a fantastic rhyme scheme. You make it look easy and it's not.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|good write, erin! :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Explosive thought process you put me through.|