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| Reviewed by Mac |
5/22/2003 |
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| Nice words. Well written. I like it. Keep going so you can be a rich and famous writer and I can say I knew you when....lol |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
5/18/2003 |
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| This was exceptionally written touching the soul with each word...... |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Dessaint |
5/18/2003 |
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| Hi Janet, love the first stanza especially! |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
5/18/2003 |
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G'day to you!
I'm just astounded firstly, so a review is hard to write when your mouth is to the ground and your head is like, "Whoa." Loved the collabration and it's very very satisfying to the reader.
Lots of Love
*-x Brittany x-* |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/18/2003 |
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The mind can see anything
All is better on the home front
xoxoxoxox |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
5/18/2003 |
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| Hi Janet, this is a little melancholy-ish. a grown up six year old |
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| Reviewed by Sara Russell |
5/18/2003 |
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This is very poignant. It can hurt sometimes to keep looking back more than forward. Well-expressed feelings here....
All the best, Sara. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/18/2003 |
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Marvellous write! You have led this readers mind wandering...
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
5/18/2003 |
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| Two great writers has tangled one more time, your writes always moves the heart and mind,,Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
5/18/2003 |
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Genius.
Your poems always move me...excellent work! |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
5/18/2003 |
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Goddess,
you and Alan always amaze me at your unique work together!!!LOVE YOU BOTH !!!!!
Me |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/17/2003 |
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And that's the truth...as the mind sees it.
A thoughtful poem, Janet. Bravo. |
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