|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
W O W! You and YOUR words and the things you do with this language we call English! This is beauty.....and I liked the way it flowed off my tongue as I read it. Yes, read it out loud at my desk today ...AT WORK!
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|The title drew me in like a moth to yellow bulb. I get lost in the depth of your work. Excellent as always.|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|"...my pen a bold dancer..." <--- this imaginative way you have with words is where your talent lies..It's never forced.. never 'made to fit'.. Go on, my dear son, get hopeful! (smile). I especially love the last two lines as well.. you read this to me aloud.. I'm glad I have now read it with time to absorb.. God, Adam, you are amazing! You truly are! love, katy/mom xox.|
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage
|A fine work. Surreal tones.
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Hi Adam...very vivid peak into your world. You have a real gift with words. I can see what you see...almost. I can only sense the pain.|
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
Let your pen dance on with boldness...
This is so very well written. :)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|fine work Adam!!|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|G'day to you!
Wow... this is fine work. Very good to read and I imagine it was hard to write.
Lots of Love
*-x Brittany x-*
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well done, Adam. fine work.
"...From which I'll sweating awake..."
I would reword that to "From which sweating I'll awake" to read smoother.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
"Yet I love the bright sun anew with each day
And all it makes known to my mind and my heart
For here is where questions are learning to play
So here is where answers to questions must start "