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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
5/21/2003 |
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"It cannot be love because she is evil, her passion is only the green
I will not work at her beck and call
I just wait patiently for her mighty fall"
THIS right here was the = to a sucker punch! This was good. Ooooh! BAM! Excellent job with these emotions.
Teresa
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
5/19/2003 |
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| I think Vixy is a vixen |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
5/19/2003 |
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Vixy doesn't sound nice. Sorry! But it seems you're better off not worrying about this person though it is good to vent ones' thoughts.
Love,
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
5/19/2003 |
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| Sorry she hurt you, Tony! -Bear |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/19/2003 |
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oh so powerful and intense, I liked this,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
5/19/2003 |
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A very powerful, heartfelt and well written piece Tony.
love
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/19/2003 |
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| An "Evil Bitch"? I have met a few of those my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/19/2003 |
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Tony, very well done. Love this line :
I am who I am nothing can ever change, including the color of the sea
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/19/2003 |
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Good afternoon Tony!!
Very heartfelt.....and I can relate to this one all toooo well....thank you for this wonderful reminder..... I will never ignore you okay Tiger!!......lol....still trying to come up with a very naughty Tiger Poem...watchitttttt!!!!..hehehehe.....busy stirrrrrring my words in order here....will happen soon......keep your eyes on my page....and don't you dare miss it.......OKAY!!(winky)
Love
BC~Tinka
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