|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Wonderful flow - well done!
|Reviewed by Baddog1
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Precious poem here Melissa ......Loved the flow, and cascading verses|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I think this turned out beautiful, and the content perfect! I have been going through the same thing, for some reason it has been harder for me to find the time to write lately. Who ever said it gets easier as the kids get older, was mistaken! lol! Thanks for this one, it is good to know that we are not alone in our feelings.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is a great poem, enjoyed this so much. The flow is amazing.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A flawless poem.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Melissa, very well done. If only I could write that way when I am distracted. Your poetry is absolutely fabulous.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
"Yet it isn’t always easy
crawling into mountain side…
Sometimes reality is stronger
muse and I are left denied. "
excellent hate those days
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You could stick the kids in the mountain
Eileen is right on........
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautiful work. I should have such stress to produce so well.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|kids or not, this is still a good write; good to see your muse is still hard at work! :) (((HUGS))) to you, and (((HUGS))) to cody, hannah, and mitchell! :) love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was lovely, your muse has done you well!
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Very, very impressive lines here! As always well done....
Rodney Evan Bohen
For a moment when my pen can
paint the page with brilliant prose…
Where the muse can speak in whispers
as my fingers recompose.
Though these moments come unnoticed
no regard for my own will…
When the words become my own
until the soul has had it’s fill.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I agree... sometimes reality is stronger...
muse and I are left denied!!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|No matter the mood ,or attitude, you never fail the rhythm and rhyme of your poetry, it is always glorious, because it was imprinted in you at birth as part of your blueprint! You and Dani;-)!|