Two Weeping Hearts
by Jenni Kalicharan
Monday, May 19, 2003
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Written by Jenni and JonteD
while chatting one night..both searching for different things.
Deep in my heart, an aging heart,
there lays sadness through a lack of love.
I cannot change what has been
nor can I relive the past.
If from time to time I smile
then it masks the tears that sometimes fall.
From time to time we will both cry
but hopefully words will dry the tears away.
Deep in my heart, an equally aging heart,
There lays a certain sadness too.
But this sadness stems not from lack of love,
But from an emptiness deep inside.
Most times I smile and pretend I'm happy,
But only those close to me sense the pain.
Only those that I allow into my heart
See the tears and help dry them with their caring words.
Deep in my heart, an always hurting heart,
Plays every single love song ever been sung,
And I listen with intent to the lyrics of love,
Feeling that they were all penned for you and me,
Every time I go to sing along I start to cry,
Wishing and praying that you were here now,
A million hit songs but only one sweet you,
Heartache, the word that was started with me,
I can't help but think of you, every image I have,
All the seconds of the day, for ever, I will love you.
Deep in my heart, a loving heart,
Is a corner saved for that special one;
The only one who could fill the emptiness
And make my life complete.
No matter where this heart of mine may roam,
Or what worldly pleasures I may seek,
That little corner will always feel like
An unfurnished room in a cold, dark house.
But the caring and loving words of friends like you,
Help to make the loneliness bearable.
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful work Jenni !!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A beautiful collaboration Jenni. Well done both of you.
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|i hear the lonliness here
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Beautiful work, Jenni
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|((((jenni)))) thanks so much for your heartfelt review; i have missed your writes, too. hope you don't leave here; the den wouldn't be the same without you! wonderful write, sad, but well done! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So sad but extremely well penned, Jenni.|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|This one is so sad but excellent in every way.
Best wishes to you always Jenni.
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
anything you touch is
infussed with beauty,
sense and love --
a good write
|Reviewed by Tiana
|A beautiful write girl! Friends are priceless gems :) (((hugs)))|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is so good excellent colloboration.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Friends, we have to have them
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Its great to have loving friends when we walk our lonely paths. Wonderful write.|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|This was donw with so much beauty|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautifully done, Jenni. Each verse a gem.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|wonderful collaboration...well done|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Hated those unfurnished rooms,|