|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
This is our first meeting. Thanks sooo
much for the challenge--gave me a context to break a block, and I took it. Yours is shades of "Wuthering Heights." Does your instructor know you're inspiring us??? Vicky
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Nice write. Will try these 16 later.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Tony, this was really great indeed! We must have been both thinking about "Wuthering Hieghts" the time we both wrote this?????
..... but how is it that my poem seems to be the continuation of this write??????....and THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I'M READING THIS POEM OF YOURS.
On that night I wrote, I read other poets, Tinka Bourkes, and and some other poets, but someone was doing something to their poems (I don't want to get into this, sorry), and THAT got my attention for your challenge for the 16 words; so I had immediately sat down to write that poem of mine....but funny it looks like it is the continuation of YOUR poem here. Wow!!!!!
This is all empathy or what?????.....Just some strange things that I cannot explain. Perhaps we should expand our writes into a story.
Wow!!!!! Just so strange!!!!!!!!!
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Diane Wagner
|Hi Tony, this is really good. I took the challenge and mine was quite different.
I'll post it. Diane
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Wonderful poem. Love it. S.|
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
this is a very creative way to write..!! Loved it..
Peace and harmony, Dove
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Tony, this is great, I'm gonna give it a try.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent, I loved how it turned out, interesting challenge!
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
This was fantastic...
Could not of done better
Thanks for you know what.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|You suceeded. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
This is really nicely done!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Tony in my humble opinion this is your best work, the flow and use of words were excellent as was the topic! Beautifully done!Kudo's;-)!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is excellent, Tony. You've used the words very very well.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Good Afternoon Tony!:O)
This is indeed very well done, I would definitely say this one gets a A+!:O)
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Tony, this is very well done. Love the read and everything flowed perfectly.|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|I did not choose the words, my teacher choose them. I have one more to do 17 words, in story form.|
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
|Yay another challenge!! You know I just have to try this... I love these types of challenges. Great write!
Lady D :P
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A superb writing using these tangled words. I have never been one who could pass this type of challenge by, so I will see what I can come up with before the end of the week. Thanks for the challenge. WooHoo...on the write!!!!|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Good job, Tony. What an interestiing challenge, I never tried one of these before. This character in your poem, would make a great villan in a short story!|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Wow! Tony! Did you choose the 16 words? This is deep..... -Bear|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Tony this one is awesome and what a challenge love the choice of words.