Goodbye must come (fictional) (poem) by the phantom pheonix on AuthorsDen

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Goodbye must come (fictional) by the phantom pheonix Wednesday, May 21, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan Only fiction I was depressed today this is what I post because of my depression.
No teaqrs No regret No sadness To dwell In the heart No lingering pain To fester In the mind Our together Was the light Of the day The laughter Of joy The tears Of healing But goodbye must come This is but a cycle Like the seasons The rotation Of the planets Around the sun Goodbye must come Our path's Are to diverge Our live's to seperate Maybe we will See each other again But for now Goodbye must come.

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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	5/25/2003

I can truely empathise as I've had depression since time began, and everyday is one hell of a fight, even to get out of be, well expressed..




Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)	5/23/2003

Missed reading your work... Moving expression in this great write...




Reviewed by Birdie Houston	5/22/2003

Your work is always so grand




Reviewed by Marilyn Seray	5/22/2003

So sad. I'm sorry for your depression, but it's good that you can write about it




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)	5/22/2003

Poignant and beautiful, hope you feel better soon Chad.




Reviewed by Tony Nerone	5/21/2003

Hi Chad, I wish I can help you, But I cannot even help myself. I think what Linda suggested is true. It is just so very hard to do. I think this write was exceptional because you made us feel the reality of your inner pain. Feel Better tony




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	5/21/2003

Nice work for a depressed soul. Bravo.




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	5/21/2003

This was so excellently expressed, I hope you feel better soon my friend, Reindeer




Reviewed by Linda Hill	5/21/2003

Sweet friend Never say goodbye Hold you head up high You are special and kind Don't let depression rule your mind I know what it can do Because I have it too Climb out of the darkness into the lite Claw if you have too, but friend, FIGHT! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love, Linda




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	5/21/2003

(((chad))) ((((((HUGS)))))) just because i care...i've been there, too...powerful, heartfelt write...one of your best! ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/21/2003

I applaud you Chad for handling your depression with such a fine write, it is very well done!




Reviewed by a- maryllis	5/21/2003

Sorry to hear you were depressed... Sometimes our best poetry comes out of sadness... I think this one was great! Good stuff Chad.