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CNR 6213
by john k zimmerman
Thursday, May 22, 2003
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She is a 4-8-4 steam locomotive
on static display in Toronto,
near the Ex |
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time was when my wheels were polished
by mile upon mile of steel rail;
when before my pilot lay the entire
Dominion, mare ad mare, sea to sea;
when with a fire in my belly and a head
of superheated steam at the throttle i
pounded the main, Halifax to Vancouver
time was when in smoke and thunder
I raced across the wide, rolling prairies
hauling fancy varnish or fast freight;
when people told time by my passing;
when the long lonesome sound of my voice
inspired school boys or broke a maidens heart.
But now cold and lonesome i lie in this park.
Cold. No steam, nor smoke, nor fire, now,
warmed only by the blessed, benevolent sun--
my track ends a foot beyond my couplers
lest the useless relic that I’ve become
get a run at it and break this prison...
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/26/2003 |
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This was wonderful, brought back some memories, love trains so much,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/25/2003 |
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| Very special John. Your poem put life and light back in this relic. GEM |
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| Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) |
5/23/2003 |
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Oh I really love this one John.. I had written one quit awhile ago about the caboose.. (smile) miss those too...
I can remember as a kid sitting at a train crossing, counting the train cars as they pass... and then singing the little red caboose song ;) Ahh I must be old..
Anywho.. Back to reality again.. Thanks for the memories..
Melanie |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
5/23/2003 |
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time was when in smoke and thunder
I raced across the wide, rolling prairies
hauling fancy varnish or fast freight;
when people told time by my passing;
when the long lonesome sound of my voice
inspired school boys or broke a maidens heart.
But now cold and lonesome i lie in this park.
Cold. No steam, nor smoke, nor fire, now,
warmed only by the blessed, benevolent sun--
my track ends a foot beyond my couplers
lest the useless relic that I’ve become
get a run at it and break this prison...
And now it can be a place for boys and girls to pretend.. it still goes on... just a dif path.
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
5/23/2003 |
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| Well written, great description. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/23/2003 |
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| well done... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
5/22/2003 |
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| Good feel for what use to be :-) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/22/2003 |
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A chooc-chooc of a write......really nice John!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
5/22/2003 |
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Lovely write.. can actually picture it....
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/22/2003 |
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| Love those old trains. I ride them every chance I get. Bravo. Made me sad though. [smiles] There...I'm over it. |
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