|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Wooah creative! Rumbling write if those clouds were out right now they would turn shape to a smile ......terrific masterpiece !|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|splendid write Dale!!
When the air becomes heavy
With impending attack
And visual electricity
Fills the sky
Followed by the crash
One - hundred and two…
One - hundred and three…
One - hundred and…
I count it out
Just to see
How close it was
I let droplets
Of rain fall onto me
How it will feel
When the powerful
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a write that delights the senses!|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Written with lots of imagery, great write.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|very clever creative writing CJ,a pleasure to read!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|CJ this is excellant, love the imagery! Oh how I could just lay in the yard staring up at the clouds all day imagining such beautiful and wonderous things!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
The imagery is magical in this one
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Vivid, powerful write...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was beautiful! I loved the images here in this wonderful poem!
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|Beautiful, just splendid!!!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Love those clouds. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|OK ... This is brilliant! One of the most creative pieces I've seen.
|Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
|Okay your pinching my brain...I love the feel in this. I really loved the 2nd stanza. Very vivid.
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Very strong images, compelling and thought provoking.