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The Clouds built...
by Dale Clark

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The clouds built a castle
a dragon, a sail boat
the storms collapsed
and sank

Lightning bolts singed
a lock from fallen knight
whose sword cut both ways
and bled

Rain leaked from the wound
flowed into a cloudy ravine
a heart, an arrow
the archer bowed
in bright red

The sun disappeared
taking the clouds away
with it the threat of storms
Thunder clapped

The clouds built...

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Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Wooah creative! Rumbling write if those clouds were out right now they would turn shape to a smile ......terrific masterpiece !
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
splendid write Dale!!

When the air becomes heavy
With impending attack
And visual electricity
Fills the sky
Followed by the crash
Of displacement
One - hundred and two…
One - hundred and three…
One - hundred and…
I count it out
Just to see
How close it was
I let droplets
Of rain fall onto me
And wonder
How it will feel
When the powerful

Reviewed by jude forese
a write that delights the senses!
Reviewed by Nancy D.
Written with lots of imagery, great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
very clever creative writing CJ,a pleasure to read!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
CJ this is excellant, love the imagery! Oh how I could just lay in the yard staring up at the clouds all day imagining such beautiful and wonderous things!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
The imagery is magical in this one
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Vivid, powerful write...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was beautiful! I loved the images here in this wonderful poem!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Beautiful, just splendid!!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Love those clouds. Well done.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
OK ... This is brilliant! One of the most creative pieces I've seen.

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
Okay your pinching my brain...I love the feel in this. I really loved the 2nd stanza. Very vivid.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Very strong images, compelling and thought provoking.
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