|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Holding on to the deeper feelings......and never let them slip away!!
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|'Yet you are all that's left of me'...
I cannot move, I cannot think..for YOU dear heart are on the brink...let go..release..that's the only way to find peace..for you know that none are lost so there's no need to pay the cost....give of your goodness to those in plight...thus expanding the joy that is your LIGHT!!!
|Reviewed by D.J. Ludlow
|I have entered here and feel I have caressed the bare flesh of your soul. For such is the power and privilege of poetry such as this. (Read my poem "Will You Enter Here?" to fully understand this.)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|really like this write...|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
touching, heartbreaking write...i agree with bill, hope things get better for you soon...
(((((HUGS))))) and love,
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|A lovely touching poem.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Oh gosh Michael the options that are left to us seem so small, don't they. Long time since I saw you. I hope things get better. Bill|
|Reviewed by Candida Eittreim
|How lovely and touching this is Michael.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Haunting and beautiful. So well done. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|A lovely sadness of yearning. I know...I know.
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Very powerful write...
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|I really loved the way this flowed michael.. and how you bought it to a heart stopping end.. Truly an emotional write...