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Love ... So Refined
by Susan K. de Vegter
Saturday, May 24, 2003

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Love...So Refined

What do folks do with the words I love you
Does the whisper to ears...give solace to few
What does it take when rhythms run wild
With beats of the heart and the smile of a child
The sentence of lovers to the future of holds
For caresses of minutes and gestures so bold
I love it true ...a warm promise at best
The soul of a chance with the touch of a test
What fate is aroused when these words breath air
Will you fly with the storks or sail as a pair
Doves of all lovers lost in the clouds
Cooing and winging...singing aloud
Chasing the heart with blossoms of roses
Sparkle of eyes and kisses on noses
Chins all uplifted to embrace the kiss
His love is hers and her heart is his
Butterfly kisses and fingers entwined
Grace of a pair with hearts all refined
Smiles breaking faces and gentle warm hugs
Hearts all crimson with pushes and shoves
Lovers of shadows for one southern breezes
Quiet forms of sweethearts with tugs and soft squeezes
Lightning displays when evenings bring comets
Flashing emotion from the ground to the summit
Love held on high with the greatest of ease
"I love you" is whispered from this southern breeze
These pair of shapes all merged in time
Lovers who love with their love refined.

2003 Susan K. Rowse

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Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 5/24/2003
Nice images, especially of the flight.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/24/2003
LOVE spells our





Love hurt...but is damn nice if you have too!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/24/2003
lovely, susan! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn. :) p.s.: when you go to louisiana, could you eat some crawfish for me or listen to some cajun music? thanks! :)
Reviewed by Susan 5/24/2003
Love is sensual if its true. If it isn't true then its a lie like a lot of other farces in life.

Thank you for the review,
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/24/2003
"...The soul of a chance with the touch of a test
What fate is aroused when these words breath air
Will you fly with the storks or sail as a pair..."

Beautiful lines. Provoking too. Bravo.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/24/2003
i love you can get over used, but the sensual fell to this is real...
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