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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
5/27/2003 |
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Nice flow and beautiful imagery!
~joseph |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
5/26/2003 |
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Beautiful words and imagery.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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Beautiful and Very Well Written...I like the imagery and feel it gives me!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/26/2003 |
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Such a lovely Poem, so wonderful to read today,
Beautiful,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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| The imagery is so outstanding, a lovely write. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/26/2003 |
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| oustanding flow and imagery... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/26/2003 |
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Wonderful lines Dale!!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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A true lightworker you are..
Peace, Dove |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
5/26/2003 |
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| Astonishing write very visual and calm |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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"...Golden Sun illuminates time
humble age expresses truths
memories leave too soon
wisdom blows in the breeze
whispers suddenly carried off
by the howling wind..."
Wonderful lines, Dale.
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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Oh CJ this is beautiful, and what a Golden Sun it is inside my heart today. I am soaring so high past the Milky Way and beyond the stars to a wondeland of love. She loves me! What more does a man need than this to explode sorrow and fill a heart with bliss. Thank you for writing this poem. It fits my mood today pefectly.
Bill |
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| Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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And the cycle continues...I really liked your use of descriptions in this,"whispers suddenly carried off." Eeewwww that's just good!
~DAM~ |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
5/26/2003 |
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Good write!
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
5/26/2003 |
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Beautiful write...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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CJ,
breathtaking imagery
So poetic.
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
5/26/2003 |
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Wonderful...I love your poetry.
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Toris Okotie |
5/26/2003 |
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nicely written, Clark.
Yours poetically,
The African Poet.
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