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|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|My daughter...my little wordsmith of the heart. This is deep and touches me. I think all of us can identify with this poem in one respect or the other. Great Job baby!
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
OH my WORD.... I would argue with your mother.... Daughter of William you are girly :) Agree 111%, outstanding!
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Mariah, Exceptional write of love!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Reviewed by Elizabeth
|"...As the years come and go,
The memories slowly fade.
The light in her eyes die away.
Time was taking its toll.
And life was taking its time..."
Wonderful lines and verses. A pleasure to read.