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by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

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(We were both in the process of loosing control with each other.)


She was hugging me tight


Seems with all her might


Her loving grip felt out of sight


As her lips met mine


Shivers went down my spine


I was in loves fantasy land


Enjoying this love grandstand


It felt so wild


Like we were back to being the virgin child


When love was new


When we had no real clue


What to really do


As my mind focused back


 I knew we were right on track


Neither of us was resistant


We wanted this to go the full distant


Until the flame went out


Then we shout


Scream


Gleam


Lay and dream


 


 


 


 


 


 


 



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Oh I've walked that memory lane a few times!
Excellent! And hot!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Wahoo Grady this was a FANTASTIC Write all the way down to the dreamy end!:O)
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
YOu should be exhausted. [smiles]
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Hey Grady, chicks can do that to anybody. The lay and dream sound great though. Great rhyme! You are a rhyme champ!


yf
tony
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
sweet write, grady! well done, my friend! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :)
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Grady, WOW!!! this is sweat you never forget.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Aren't memories wonderful? Very sweet this was,,,Lisa
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