|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Yes the ocean speaks to me too....I wish I was there right now...I need it so bad!!
But it is cold and rainy and very dark outside now...so I guess I have ti talk to myself now...!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Oceans do quiet the soul...|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Ahhhh YES, it does that for me also|
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
|*sigh* I want the ocean!! :) Very serene write Josie... thank you.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|I felt this in the depths of my soul. I still long for the rhythm of the ocean and your words remind me of that longing.
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|glad to see you stayed. i would sorely miss you if you hadn't. this is an excellent poem josie, kudos'|
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Dana said it ALL for me, nod to ya Dana, nod to you too Jose, good job country.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautiful. Something about water, the ocean or a sea. Very calming to the soul.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Josie, excellent poem. You better wake up before the tide comes in. (lol) Sorry,I couldn't resist that.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
hear me i am the sea i am the wind
the sand on which you lay
i touch your forehead here
and wipe the furrow of life
the rhythm of the tide is mine
there is comfort strength
that we are one
you are loved special
adored for who you are
in my arms
i will never let you go
MOVE OVER!! i wanna be where you are right now...my furrows are deep ones!
what a stunningly peaceful, calming write...i was comforted by the tenderness and caring of this write...well done, josie, well done! *applause*
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|the ocean does have that calming effect on a person. love it! when we were nearly 18, we went to philadelphia, pa., to visit our older sister, and we went to the atlantic ocean; and the sound of the surf and the waves was asthetic and calming. very soothing to the mind and soul. i will always remember that sound of the water, and i always have loved that sound of the ocean. wonderful write, josie dear! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)|