|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
|Connie, I cried reading this..It is so touching and so true.. u have a way with words and rhymes.. U r right that is Him who is there when you write....
You have a special soul..Ever read "Gospel of Barnabas"?
|Reviewed by Tina Clark
|Excellent, insightful, beautiful poem! Thank you once again for such a wonderful read!
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Real nice poem Connie. My father should read it. Of course it wouldn't do him any good. GEM|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Beautiful Work Connie..so precious a piece...perfet for Fathers Day Indeed!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|Perfect write for Father's Day!
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|This is wonderful Connie! I love the way you write.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Connie your rhyme and flow is such a pleasure and the topic so well expressed, excellent and superb!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Hi stranger. I've missed you lots.
Great write as always......
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Excellent job, Connie. A Father's Day tribute.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Connie, that is absolutely lovely. What's sweet to see is different generations of fathers in the same family show care and love for each other. This is marvelous for Father's Day. Bravo. This is a treasure.|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|This poem, "An Olde Legend" is the real translation of what Poetry is for.
I Salute the blessed Author of "An Olde Legend".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Oh my Connie,this one is truly adorable,I am sending this to my friend whose wife is having a baby(first babe) he will love it and it is true ,the first time dad's (Adam included) must worry so about 'how and what to do,'
I feel sorry for guys ,pre mums get so fussed over and re assured (usually) but the pre dad's don't get much re assurance...it must be so hard for them but now your poem can help
with that pre worry and wonder of Fatherhood.
Really excellent concept for poem,well done!!!
Best wishes always
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|and a lovely one it IS, connie! beautiful write! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.|