|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is profound work, so real and sad.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Good work with a much needed message...how sad that some do not hear or see they way things really can be!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
oh, this one rips out the heart *tears*
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Cute poem, sad waste of a life. Happens to many when they internalize instead of living life. Good work.|
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Indeed, one of the saddest writes I've read.. guess it goes hand in hand with the last one I posted.. The Last Drink.
Excellent portrayal of an alcoholics life. Hope its a fictional account.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Sad and honest write. Hope this is just fictional, for I know you write short stories too.
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|How sad, but words that need to be heard! Thank you, Michael.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well done!... there may be a small inconsistency, in the fact, that a homeless drunk could not indulge in the luxury of jack & absolute but rather ripple...|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Captures a lifestyle. Good write, Michael.