|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|a wonderful entry to the challange.....smile|
|Reviewed by richard poor
|true love is found within...but i wonder the same as you...good write!!|
|Reviewed by Nikami
|I really enjoyed reading this!!!|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Wonderful write Serenety! Keep up the good work.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent, I loved how you met the challenge with this wonderful poem,
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
You have done an outstanding job....
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|You have more than met the challenge Serenety. This is outstanding !
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Some men are different, ture to their love
Thanks for stopping my way..
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Serenety, Wonderfully done!! It should have been graze, but grace was a fine substitute. The object of the challenge is to be creative. Of which, You certainly were!!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You did very well on this one...just one tiny mistake.....(grace (goodwill- devine love)was suppose to be "graze" (touch-brush)...that all depends if Tony did not make the spelling mistake in the firts place...okay...then I apologize for the correction..!!
|Reviewed by Linda Murray
|The challenge has been met and you have a great poem to show for it. I just loved this one.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent Serenity, I hope you can assess what caused your problem in your relationship, before going into another one...it should help you beware of making the same mistake, and gettting hurt again. Great write|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|always keep yourself open to suggestion... good write!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Hope it isn't true. Waxes more of anger than of poetic justice.|
|Reviewed by Bill Murray
|Serenety....you have a gift! You can use words in an amazing fashion. Wow! I doubt if anyone else can even come slightly close to handling the challenge the way you have. What marvellous potential you have. You can meet greater challenges, and meeting the one placed inside your heart is not that difficult is it? It is only a matter of elevating beings ... he down and you up. What power you allow someone is all they have. And it can be decreased or increased when you choose. You are too sharp to let yourself be taken in. Rise to life's challenge. It's "up up and away in my little red balloon." Then a million balloons will follow. Bill|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Darned good. YOu've exceeded the challenge.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Aaaaahhhhh! This was truly amazing write. Enjoyed every word of this.
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|serenity, Excellent reply poetry for the challenge. loved your imagery.
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Wonderfully done. True love? I have heard of it, kind of like a unicorn though.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
you've not only met the challenge, you've exceeded it WELL DONE
(((HUGS))) and love,