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16 words
by serenety L
Sunday, June 01, 2003

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Inspired by Tony, I gave it a try.........


I can feel the moonlight
on my face
like a cold sword
cutting its way through my window
turning my blanket into ice.

No sleep will come to me tonight.

I feel restless
alone in my misery.

Why did I let it happen
that he made a fool out of me?

His love had lifted me to heights
beyond time and space,
he had turned me into the queen of grace
transferred fern into roses
fear into pride
reluctance into curiosity for life

I wanted him to stay forever
but he left me!

Are all men of that kind
or is there one out there
among all those human beings
who is worth it
to let him move into the residence of my heart
to give and receive
what money cannot buy:

True love ?!?!?

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Reviewed by The Gentle Man 8/5/2003
a wonderful entry to the
Reviewed by richard poor 8/4/2003
true love is found within...but i wonder the same as you...good write!!
Reviewed by Nikami 6/11/2003
I really enjoyed reading this!!!
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 6/2/2003
Wonderful write Serenety! Keep up the good work.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/2/2003
This was excellent, I loved how you met the challenge with this wonderful poem,

Reviewed by Trixie Love 6/2/2003
Hi Serenity,
You have done an outstanding job....

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Christine Morell 6/2/2003
You have more than met the challenge Serenety. This is outstanding !
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 6/2/2003
Some men are different, ture to their love
Thanks for stopping my way..
Great write.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 6/2/2003
Hi Serenety, Wonderfully done!! It should have been graze, but grace was a fine substitute. The object of the challenge is to be creative. Of which, You certainly were!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/1/2003
You did very well on this one...just one tiny mistake.....(grace (goodwill- devine love)was suppose to be "graze" (touch-brush)...that all depends if Tony did not make the spelling mistake in the firts place...okay...then I apologize for the correction..!!
Reviewed by Linda Murray 6/1/2003
The challenge has been met and you have a great poem to show for it. I just loved this one.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/1/2003
Excellent Serenity, I hope you can assess what caused your problem in your relationship, before going into another should help you beware of making the same mistake, and gettting hurt again. Great write
Reviewed by jude forese 6/1/2003
always keep yourself open to suggestion... good write!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/1/2003
Hope it isn't true. Waxes more of anger than of poetic justice.
Reviewed by Bill Murray 6/1/2003 have a gift! You can use words in an amazing fashion. Wow! I doubt if anyone else can even come slightly close to handling the challenge the way you have. What marvellous potential you have. You can meet greater challenges, and meeting the one placed inside your heart is not that difficult is it? It is only a matter of elevating beings ... he down and you up. What power you allow someone is all they have. And it can be decreased or increased when you choose. You are too sharp to let yourself be taken in. Rise to life's challenge. It's "up up and away in my little red balloon." Then a million balloons will follow. Bill
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 6/1/2003
Darned good. YOu've exceeded the challenge.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/1/2003
Aaaaahhhhh! This was truly amazing write. Enjoyed every word of this.

May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 6/1/2003
serenity, Excellent reply poetry for the challenge. loved your imagery.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 6/1/2003
Wonderfully done. True love? I have heard of it, kind of like a unicorn though.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/1/2003
WOW serenety

you've not only met the challenge, you've exceeded it WELL DONE

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
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