Once Upon A Time
by Rican Romeo
Sunday, June 01, 2003
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Once upon a time
I met this girl, she was so fine
with ivory skin
and eyes that shined
I'd do anything, just to make her mine.
I became a stalker of some-kind
following her, to see what I could find
but she payed me no mind
never noticing that i was always a few paces behind.
One day our paths just aligned
she finally noticed me,her eyes met mine
everything else seemed to slip my mind
I built up some nerve and invited her to dine
She gladly accepted, with no question or whys
and continued her gaze deep into my eyes
her beauty sent chills up amd down my spine
What else can I say? She even got me to rhyme!!
I spent all day with her until the hour of nine
If this was love is what I wanted to define
and I can tell it all just by looking in her eyes.
So I leaned right in, hoping it wasnt a crime
to feel her soft lips, pressed against mine
her lips were so tender, sweet and divine
and her loving kiss put a stop to time.
Right then and there two hearts intertwined
long long ago, Once upon a time.
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|Reviewed by Dominican Diva (Reader)
|I wonder y tears liked it so much.lol
I loved it too.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
I like your prose :)
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So romantic and very lovely.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I really like this heartfelt, romantic, and well expressed in rhyme!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Sweetly done. Romantic you.|
|Reviewed by Angelica Young
|Oh That Is so sweet, I really really liked it. Boy Got talent! lol