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i'm fixin' to be 44 years old on june
26th...this reflective poem came to
mind...i hope you enjoy
why does everyone
that since someone's
they can't do that
"you're too old"
to be climbin mountains
runnin marathons
just because they're old
doesn't mean
they're dead
or that they should
be wasting away
in some "old folk's home"
in some smelly dank
lonely room
whatever happened to
for your elders
as i'm gettin older
i could stand
some new experiences
some excitement
in my life
maybe not runnin marathons
or skydivin
not with these
ol' arthritic bones
there are still things
i wanna do
before i check out
from life
go on an african safari
meet the maasai
go to alaska
see the northern lights
for real
have a book (or two)
of my poems
pet a cheetah
'cause i love their
sweet, sad, tearlined faces
ride in a helicopter
learn swahili and japanese
go to new york city
to see a broadway play
"lion king" would be awesome
i wanna see my dreams
come to pass
gotta lotta livin
left to do
no matter how old i get
let me live my life
and enjoy
the time God's given me
and follow my dreams

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Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
Let's have an AD party and go to NY to see Lion King!! Anyone interested??????
Reviewed by serenety L
Hi Karla. I am almost the same age and I am more active than I used to be years ago. Sure there are things that we cannot do that easily anymore. But as long as we do what we want to and stick to it don't regret it - we are alive. Your youth will never die if you won't let it happen. Move on. Love. S.
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Karla,
Being able to age, is without
a doubt a wonderful gift from God...
I feel so blest when my
birthday rolls around...
For I have completed yet
another year on earth...
So many leave this world
at such a young age...

Happy early birthday, to
you and Karen...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by William Bonilla
a lovely write... Karla
the 40s are great years
enjoy them kid and your sister Karen too
Happy Birthday
Reviewed by Christine Morell
They say that life begins at that a saying in your Country, Karla? Your smile and good heart will always keep you young.
Your friend
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Beautifully said Karla! I loved this, Still time to rock the world..!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Happy Bday but you are still a Spring Chicken!!
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
Karla, congrats ahead already... You are as old as you feel, my friend. But don't let people around you withold you from dreaming.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Karla this is a good account of the dreams you have, and your feelings on aging, yes you are young, but each decade brings new awarness of how quickly age comes upon us;-)Keep dreaming they do come true;-)
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
You are a baby.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Oh yeah...just remember your words when you get really old for real and accomplish some of your are not old at all and just because we suffer from the ravages of a little time does not mean we stop hoping, and dreaming, and wishing, and setting goals for ourselves. It does not mean we stop being beautiful inside and out as you are. Just you wait til your dedication comes out and then tell me you are old.
Always your California friend,
Reviewed by Mary Cannon
Hi Karla gotta a few notches ahead of you
and haven't missed a beat, I tell myself
every day that I am young, you keep holding
on to your dreams and just as you wrote this
life inspired poem you can write your history
words to enjoy by..

Love Mary
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}} Beautiful write...beautiful soul. Such is Karla.
Reviewed by David Alexander, Sr. (Reader)
Karla, please, don't say 44 is old. Dang, I've got shoes older than you.. I'm old, and I know it. But you aren't old till you say you are. Do everything you want, God only allows us one ticket, use it.. God Bless
Poppa aka David
Reviewed by john zimmerman
44? if 44 is old what does that me at 55?

personally i refuse to get old

good write
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Sweetie, you are never to old for anything. I started Karate when I was fifty something. I learned to fly an airplane when I was thirty something pushing forty something. [won't tell you everything-smiles]

Never stop doing. It is death.

Like the work.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
I agree with you! My son and I had this very conversation just the other day. He asked me if I wanted to go deep sea fishing,, then he said don't worry Mom I see 'old' people doing it all the time! Now I'm only 44 myself,,,and I just don't consider that old, but apparently a 23 year old does! lol Chase those dreams Karla,,,and I hope you catch them all! Lisa
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Age is a matter of mind. Sure the body ages, but it ages a lot faster if your thinking old. Keep young! You have the secret. Keep dreaming and knowing your reaching for your dreams.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
i like your poem, karla; we all have things we would like to do before we get too old to enjoy them (but there are older people than us who are doing that very thing, and they deserve our respect and admiration! like bob hope, as an example..100 and still going strong; maybe not as quick as he once was, but he is still alive and is able to communicate!). or our grandma. to the end, she was a spunky, determined old gal, and she wouldn't take nothing from anybody! you know how stubborn she was....with everything she's had to go through in her life, it's a wonder she lived as long as she did! LOL i certainly have dreams myself (go back to the grand ole opry or go to fan fair, go to alaska and see the northern lights, or maybe a polar bear or two, or to africa, pet a cheetah and see the maasai, go to branson, missouri, or just travel the country without a worry or a care in the world, with you by my side)! what better way than to achieve dreams with the person you love the most, huh???? :) and i love the pic, reminds me so much of kentucky or tennessee; sure do miss that lovely part of the country! (((HUGS))) and love, your twink, karen lynn. :)
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