|Reviewed by Diane Wagner
|I think your Dad did a really good job raising you and would be (IS) proud of you.
May this loving poem come back from your own kids to bite you in your heart.
|Reviewed by Buddy Angel
|What a great tribute to your father, thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
What a beautiful tribute to your father whom you obviously loved very much
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Beautiful tribute!!! There should only be more like this these days...|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|He sounds like a wonderful man. Who wouldn't wish for a son to compose as beautiful and as loving a tribute as this. You miss him very much, don't you? Sending you positive vibes today, William. He would be proud to read this.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent... (my father was born the same year)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent tribute to your Father!!
Thanks for reminding me.....lol!!
I made an error on my last post...was suppose to end like this...
The windows is starless…. Still
The clock is ticking…
It’s past midnight
I rest my pen… sleep
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|William...This is superb write...very very superb write...a gem...a masterpiece...thank u so much....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Oh William this is a SPLENDID WRITE AND TRIBUTE that touched me ever so this night and year...almost lost my father at Easter due to a heart attack...he had a quadruple bypass and is now doing fine. I am saddened at yours and anyone else's loss BUT I revel with you in such sweet, tender, touching reminiscing!!!!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|William This is an excellent tribute to your Father and the fathers here. Wonderful poetry.
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage
|Fine memories, Sir. You did them justice.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderful tribute William, beautifully expressed!|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Nice tribute, William. My father (1911-1971) was a contemporary of your father's. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
This nearly made me cry...
Such a beautiful tribute
to your father....
Oh how some memories can
be so precious and everlasting...
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was such a lovely tribute to your father, so very beautiful..Happy father's day,
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Thank You William for sharing this exceptional writing. May our Dads rest in the Lords care.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|beautiful write, william! :) (((HUGS))) happy father's day to you and all the dads here at the den! :)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
your dad would be so proud of this
beautiful tribute to him *i'm sorry for your loss*
(((HUGS))) and love,