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This duel began after Jim McClellan & I began reviewing each other's work. Jim it's led to this..going our Peeps and inner Posse. Thought you all deserved a peek..Cause Wit N Style are seriously in play.Also thank Jim for letting me "wink" at you..Check the pic.


From the Woods he swings like Tiger
Hoop shoops like LeBron
Daddy Mac issues a challenge
This Baby Girl says " DREAM ON!"

LeBron may have the flow
He glides down court puts on a real show
Mac issues a challenge - dares an attack,
He can deal with y'all he ain't taking no flack!


Hi Donna
or should I call you Dee
writing rhymes is addictive
you wait and see

You want me to dream
shall i dream of thee
the spirited redhead
laying these words on me

Or shall i drop another verse
make it hot and terse
better believe if i do it
the outcome will be worse.


If one concedes..
which would it be
conceded or conceited? LMFAO..
Still checking it
Big Mac talks back -
She is still flexing it..
Wannabe arresting it or
is it just me?
Word up says the throw down
is no go too hot the flow.
Doesn't matter bad or good..
And there goes a Tiger to the Woods working the turf for
Little Red, writing from the Hood....
( I was LMAO here )


Oh I see
how it's gon be
hold up are you blind
What? you can't see ;)

Can you see this
my metamorphic twist
I spit words and verbs
from the hood or the burbs

Dee is pretty hot
her rhymes hit the spot
so I guess you can say
I like em a lot

now back to the matter at hand
what was i doing, working the turf, the land
searching for little red
so I can be fed ;)
gobble you up, hood and all
whether you're five or six feet tall

It's back on you
whatcha gon do?


Swinging on the Down Low-
Kicking it up a notch -
For you Mac Baby - Here we go
Breaking it - flowing for real
Damn straight- Can I deal?

Baby Girl is giving you a ride
watching you trip my electric slide
Lil Red waving as she flies by
You be the rhyming guy
Asking how that Lil Red get so Fly?
No need to be racy
'Cause this Spice Girl is tasty
Rolling 4star wit and shutting down the flack
She's hitting faster than a heart attack
She caught him thinking - he likes her rack
Tossing it back at Big Baby Mac !

Wat you got Mr Big Stuff? Yo Rhymes, ain't that tuff!


Take it up a notch?
You must be trippin
like you're drinking scotch
I'll reply to both,
of your message posts
with one fluid motion
here's the notion--

Baby girl's got
flaming locks
so i call her red
but now she's blue
cause she's missing out
no, she hasn't a clue
but let me fill you in
nice and slow...uh oh

Anyway I spray wicked verses
like sailors do curses
and snatch words from mid air
like thieves do purses

Can you feel?
this rhyme is real
and it's about to melt you down
hold up, breathe!
cause it ain't sad
and flip the script on that frown

Yeah you can call me Mac
and I'll reach back
to grab the rack
if the stack is packed
so don't lack or hold back
cuz I know you got it like that


I said Kicking it
as in mouthing off and
flicking it.. toss who?
Baby Girl is Bossin' You!

You should be hip
to this trip
Baby Red making you flip
you got skills
you got game
when I signed on tonight
saw your picture AND
your name-
on the AD front page
cryin from laughing so
Who the hell DOES Mac know?

Foxy Red's not tricking you
A candle can't flicker
next to my flame
Mac says he deals the
cards to this game-
It's Not So -
Everyone gonna know MY Name
Cuz its a low down dealing shame
Claims he has a deck that's loaded
Lemme shout it NOW- that ain't ALL
that's Bloated.. =)
Yessirreee Mac checking the rack
having a heart attack
Dee says who you fooling with Jack?
rap rapp rapp rapping
Mac's going to be wicked devoted
Baby Girl gonna sugar coat it
cause Rhyming King will be demoted
You Go Lil Red!
Baby Girl from the Hood- she can be quoted
He ain't no Puff Daddy Mac
Baby Girl - Red, writing winking hood
is beating his game back
Mac knows I'm snappin' 'em
Gonna Flatten' - him
When I rhyme - Baby Girl is Platinum!!!

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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was excellent! Loved every word, Ha!

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Dueling hippity hop hop!!! Love it!
Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Put your hands in the air like you just don't care, girlfriend. I believe you flattened him.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Oh my...I must agree with all who have reviewed before me Donna...this is definitely a funny/cute "sure fire hit!"
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
what do i think of "platinum"?



(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Great!...I like this!...a dueling duet!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
This is very well written!!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Really funny, wonderful duet!
Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
lmao.....too funny. ~Kerry
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Hi Again, Donna
Now this is some funny stuff! Btw, thanks for the reviews. Stay sweet:)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Hey girlfriend this is so good!!!:)
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