As A Tribute To Spirit Of True American Indian....
by - - - - - - - TRASK
Saturday, June 07, 2003
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Awed By The Red Bear Her Exquisite Beautiful Photo Life Like Spirits Of American Indian Cry's Out...
Many People Think I'm (Mad)Indian,I Don't
Smile,All While I Don'tLaugh Either,Don't
Matter To Me Till The End Comes; More_
Poetic Justice Than Eye Can See;Look East
Emense Clouds Of Dust, Hoof Beats, Beast
Of Burden,Ground Shakes,I Clear My Eyes_
Of It Comes My Dark MyHorse,St MichaelMy
Arc Angel Breaks His Stride,HisSword,Vie,
Drawn, Dark Baby Panther Snarling Runs_
His Right Side,My Little Children Along,
Running,ScreamingLike Eagles InPain,Along
Behind 1000's Of Horses Indian Spirits_
Follow,That Ground Now Rumbles,In Tide,No
One Human Being Escapes The Avenger,Low
And, Behold Humanity Get's Trampled_
Amogst The "Great Divide "_
Poetic Justice Or You Can't Believe It,No
One Being Has Come Closer To Truly Know
The Meaning Of Word Of (God),Than Me_
Nor The Spirit Of The American Indian In
Red Bears Exqusite Photo, Spirit Not Sin,
But Within, I That Mad Indian Do Ride_
Great Divide In Spirit As St Michael,He
Arc's His Sword,Air Screaming,My SpiritBe
In His Hand,You,Humanity Lose One Hand_
At Time,Rhyme Other,Never,Ever Molest Or
Rape,Maim,Kill a Little Child Again;Your
Soul(s) I,TRASK Hold In Palm Of My Hand_
Quicken That Time;I Hear You Scream Out
InHorror,Pain Endure Eternity,Dream,Doubt
Devine As Truth:"Suffer Little Children"_
No More; Poetic Justice, My Dream Evens
That Score For Sure; Until,I Hear,
I, TRASK Still will Be, I Am_
In Your Face...
Retribution, TRASK c 2003 TRASK
_While Many People Do Not Believe That
"Great Divide" Exists,It Is Border That
Breaks The Physical World With The_
"Other Side", Whence You Die,It's Where
Your Spirit Goes,Dwells,There Is Where
There's Nothing Else Beyond It_
In Eye's Of (God); He As (God) Lives Not
In a World Nor a Dimension Nor Ought
Is (God) Even Of A Spirit;(God) Is That_
I, TRASK Am In His Eye's a Family, As
Dream He Creates, An Energy That Is As
(God)Was Will Always Be In His Eye's...
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|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
An excellent write my friend. One I will have to come back to read and re read.. Kudo's to you!
|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik
|I am relatively new to your style. I'm realizing just now that the capitalizing of each word adds to the meaning. Now in eastern language, which is near and dear to me, there is no such thing as capitalization. But I must live as a westerner and I am glad I read this poem as a westerner.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
trask!!!! *applauding wildly*
((HUGS)) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
excellent, TRASK, just beautiful (poem and pic)
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Beautiful picture and write. A great tribute to Bear.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Love it dear Trask!!!!
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A little different for you, but I love it...and the art is wonderful. ~Trish~|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|MOST BEAUTIFULLY DONE TRASK!!
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Oh I love this write could feel depth coming through as flowing winds excellent I applaud you !!! Very kewl pic|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|like the change of direction... there's a little mad indian is us all...|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Stopped in to see what condition you were in. Good write too.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Art and poem gow well together! Nice change;-)|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|TRASK, I am in tears....I cannot find any words..... thank you is not enough! You are a kindred spirit....
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|A departure, and I like it.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Excellent Poem Trask, And I love the Picture,
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Wonderful poem and pic!
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)