by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, June 08, 2003
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She sits at her computer,
Night after night.
Until the dawn's light.
Her passion is real,
Like her dreams.
Filled with conviction,
And magical schemes.
Knight in shining armor,
To take her away.
Carry her off,
Into a bright, new day.
Her poems are vivid,
And filled with her light.
The better to charm,
Her bright, shining knight.
And if he responds by email,
To answer her plight.
A flurry of messages,
Seals love at first sight.
Alas, life is not magic,
And the fairy tale isnít true .
The slob, lout, ... jerk!
Just wants to hit on you.
And so you return,
To a lonely night life.
Turning out poems,
Of troubles and strife.
And if, perchance,
You fall asleep one night.
Dream not of trouble,
Dream not of plight.
Go down by the meadow,
Go down by the glen.
Open your basket,
And let nature in.
Let nature ravish you,
Take it all in.
Thereís nothing unnatural.
In natural sin.
And if a lad happens by,
One bright, shining day.
Open your basket,
Invite him to play.
Pining and whining,
Wonít get your way.
When love comes along,
Like a bright, shining day.
Copyright 2003 © Ronald W. Hull
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|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Amusing, and sad all in one hit. I defy any lonely poetess to send you and email and fall asleep!!!
Once again, stimulating, I like the brain surges.
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Very imaginative and well written.
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|Hmm..aren't we all lonely poet/ess
Aren't we all the empty vessels waiting to be filled by the Great Mystery..receptive to its messages...is our joy in that? Is our bliss in the twining of our Beings with the void?...mmm..or is our joy in the opening of the basket...
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Definetly one of my favorites grt8 poem with a circle of visions dancing through the mind Excellent !!!! This is going to my library tonight|
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Wonderful one. In some of those statements I recognized me.
|Reviewed by Amy Hawke
|I love this you know.. had to come back to read it again|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is a wonderful beautiful poem Ronald!!
|Reviewed by June Thompson
|and down by the meadow the poetess plays
dreaming and scheming out her new days
waiting and hoping for her knight to come
adding and subtracting coming up with the sum
making ends meet in her vivid little mind
alone in the meadow... mmm a magnificient find
wonderful write Ron... thank you
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A lovely write, Ron.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Oh my Ron this is fantastic...I really loved this! Sitting here at 4am I am thinking as I read this piece omg geez sort of sounds a bit like me! ;O)
Astounding Message...Fantastic Write!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i like this... well done!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Love from the internet I can't understand. When they meet it's always a different story.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Nice poem with a great message. Good write Ron!
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|A beautiful poem with wisdom in it.|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|This is wonderful, Ronald! I love the tale....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Ronald this is superbly written, full of good thinking, and nature, nothing better!|
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|A fantastic poem, filled with what so many of us experience. We all could use a little more of nature's beauty!
Nice write, Ronald.
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Very nice poem, Ron!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was very lovely, just a wonderful and rather wise poem,