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Tinka and the Spiders
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Sunday, June 08, 2003

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Art by me you see. Tinka ask for it. She's a good friend to have and this is all in fun. The spider in my head made me write it!

Her name is Tinka
she will get all pink a
when she has to think a
she insist Iím a fink a
I give her a nice wink a,
but she insist Iím a stink a

spiders get in her head
thatís her big dread
she donít mind spiders in her bed
but hates this write Iíve spread
I should write Tinka and tell her sheís special instead

She is a great writer
and will let a spider sit down be side her

sheís not like miss muff it
she knows how to tuff it

So all of you spiders who dwell in her head
Beware, Tinka will crush you until your dead

when those spiders tickle her brain
at the point she thinks sheís insane, and
giving herself all the blame
she thinks about me and jumps on (or off, hee. hee.) a plane.

Ron Axelson

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Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 7/9/2004
this is great, Ron! thanks for the link. love your ending. whole thing made my obsession with the creepy-crawlies a little less, well, obsessive. BTW, love your art if I haven't mentioned before.
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 6/15/2003
Kewl......fine work
Reviewed by A PAX 6/12/2003
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 6/11/2003
My computer's been on the fritz & it's good to read you & chuckle again. I'm with Tinka, in that I can't abide those "speeders" either! Especially the BIG ones! :)
Reviewed by jing javier 6/11/2003
very nice, my dear!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 6/10/2003
"Hee hee" is right! As usual--great write, great fun, and yup, great art!! Missed your poetry and artwork, my friend!
Reviewed by serenety L 6/10/2003
What a cute story. Enjoyed reading it. Love. S.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/9/2003
(((ron))) tinka will love this, even though she doesn't like spiders...*i'm not to fond of 'em either*

the poem and the artwork...great!!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 6/9/2003
Very funny write Ron, you have a great sense of humor!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 6/9/2003
Ron!! This is fun.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/9/2003
HA! a fun write; and love the drawing! i am sure tinka will love this wonderfully wacky tribute to her; i sure did! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) to you, sketchman! :)
Reviewed by Christine Morell 6/9/2003
This is really funny. I bet Tinka loves it
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 6/9/2003
Excellent work Ron!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 6/9/2003
OMG...Ron this was such a fun piece to read...I loved it...but ummm <looking down> "Me thinka you better now watcha out for Tinka!" ;O)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/8/2003
Okay!! Mister Ron Spider you have me cornered here...but beware ...if I get out of this tight spot and survive this heart gonna regret this.....hehehehehehe.....just do glad to see I am bigger than you Mister Spider...BRRR..
shivers runs down my did a great job on this......thanks anyways.....let me see....which airliner will be the quickest.....Virgin airlines......or S A A...???
So Ron...thanks for this reminder....just remember it okay!!!!!

"So all of you spiders who dwell in her head
Beware, Tinka will crush you until your dead"

Love < < < <Smiling...did I mean LOVE???>>>

O! well!!

Reviewed by jude forese 6/8/2003
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 6/8/2003
Great, Ron. Nice tribute to a foxy lady.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/8/2003
This was so funny! I enjoyed this so much, I am sure Tinka will love it!

Reviewed by Nancy D. 6/8/2003
Enjoyable write.

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 6/8/2003
LMAO!! Ton, this is so funny...yThanks for the smiles... I'm certain Stinker, oops Tinka will love it...
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 6/8/2003
What a fun read Ron.
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 6/8/2003
Ron, this is pure you. lol...great and fun poem with lots of imagery. I kinda hate spiders too, so I know how she feels. ;) Silver
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 6/8/2003
Gotta love this, but spiders...NO WAY!!!!! :)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 6/8/2003
LOL...OMG....glad it's her and not me...hate the little b_________s!...Excellent write and picture.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 6/8/2003
hehehe!!! Now that is a good sketch glasses on the spider{{smiles}}}} Love the write.
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 6/8/2003
This is funny!!
I'm sure Tinka loves this!
Great job, Ron.
Jill :-)
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 6/8/2003
This is great! still laughing...hope Tinka will too....
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 6/8/2003
Boy, you're good...real good...talented as all get out...but don't...get out, I mean...cuzz you're GOOD!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 6/8/2003
I got a huge laugh from this, and Tinka will, too! Great write!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/8/2003
Fantastic Ron, one of your best! I bet Tinka loves it!;-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 6/8/2003
Great fun write! :-) I am sure Tinka will love it!
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