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Tinka and the Spiders
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

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Art by me you see. Tinka ask for it. She's a good friend to have and this is all in fun. The spider in my head made me write it!


Her name is Tinka
she will get all pink a
when she has to think a
she insist Iím a fink a
I give her a nice wink a,
but she insist Iím a stink a

spiders get in her head
thatís her big dread
she donít mind spiders in her bed
but hates this write Iíve spread
I should write Tinka and tell her sheís special instead

She is a great writer
and will let a spider sit down be side her

sheís not like miss muff it
she knows how to tuff it

So all of you spiders who dwell in her head
Beware, Tinka will crush you until your dead

when those spiders tickle her brain
at the point she thinks sheís insane, and
giving herself all the blame
she thinks about me and jumps on (or off, hee. hee.) a plane.



Ron Axelson
©6/8/03
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Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
this is great, Ron! thanks for the link. love your ending. whole thing made my obsession with the creepy-crawlies a little less, well, obsessive. BTW, love your art if I haven't mentioned before.
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Kewl......fine work
Reviewed by A PAX
lol
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
My computer's been on the fritz & it's good to read you & chuckle again. I'm with Tinka, in that I can't abide those "speeders" either! Especially the BIG ones! :)
Reviewed by jing javier
very nice, my dear!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
"Hee hee" is right! As usual--great write, great fun, and yup, great art!! Missed your poetry and artwork, my friend!
Reviewed by serenety L
What a cute story. Enjoyed reading it. Love. S.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((ron))) tinka will love this, even though she doesn't like spiders...*i'm not to fond of 'em either*

the poem and the artwork...great!!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Very funny write Ron, you have a great sense of humor!

Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Ron!! This is fun.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
HA! a fun write; and love the drawing! i am sure tinka will love this wonderfully wacky tribute to her; i sure did! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) to you, sketchman! :)
Reviewed by Christine Morell
This is really funny. I bet Tinka loves it
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
Excellent work Ron!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
OMG...Ron this was such a fun piece to read...I loved it...but ummm <looking down> "Me thinka you better now watcha out for Tinka!" ;O)
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Okay!! Mister Ron Spider you have me cornered here...but beware ...if I get out of this tight spot and survive this heart attack....you gonna regret this.....hehehehehehe.....just do glad to see I am bigger than you Mister Spider...BRRR..
shivers runs down my spine...you did a great job on this......thanks anyways.....let me see....which airliner will be the quickest.....Virgin airlines......or S A A...???
So Ron...thanks for this reminder....just remember it okay!!!!!

"So all of you spiders who dwell in her head
Beware, Tinka will crush you until your dead"

Love < < < <Smiling...did I mean LOVE???>>>

O! well!!


Love
Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Great, Ron. Nice tribute to a foxy lady.
Leland
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was so funny! I enjoyed this so much, I am sure Tinka will love it!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Nancy D.
Enjoyable write.

Nancy
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
LMAO!! Ton, this is so funny...yThanks for the smiles... I'm certain Stinker, oops Tinka will love it...
Hugs
Jenni
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
What a fun read Ron.
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Ron, this is pure you. lol...great and fun poem with lots of imagery. I kinda hate spiders too, so I know how she feels. ;) Silver
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Gotta love this, but spiders...NO WAY!!!!! :)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
LOL...OMG....glad it's her and not me...hate the little b_________s!...Excellent write and picture.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Sketchman,
hehehe!!! Now that is a good sketch glasses on the spider{{smiles}}}} Love the write.
Peg
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
This is funny!!
I'm sure Tinka loves this!
Great job, Ron.
Jill :-)
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
This is great! still laughing...hope Tinka will too....
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Boy, you're good...real good...talented as all get out...but don't...get out, I mean...cuzz you're GOOD!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
I got a huge laugh from this, and Tinka will, too! Great write!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Fantastic Ron, one of your best! I bet Tinka loves it!;-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Great fun write! :-) I am sure Tinka will love it!

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