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Burp!
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Monday, June 09, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Oh
excuse my rudeness please
I'm not really a sleaz
Been drinking soda pop
Couldn't stop
drank too much
so I got to get back in touch
with reality
before I become a fatality
Being too greedy
chowing too speedy
food
is so good
Burp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry for the rudeness
It's just part of this greedy madness
BurpPPPPPPPPPPPPP
There it goes again
Hell, I just can't win
BURppppppppp!
Sorry
G
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/4/2005 |
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Have you ever tried to say Bulloowayhoo as you burp???
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/9/2003 |
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Oh Grady,
You can write about anything.
{{[smiles}}}
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Lynn Barry |
6/9/2003 |
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| humbling experience...especially when the sophisticates let go a loud one....embarrassing moments, unless you don't care...we aLL burp...remember when it was a necessary part of our days....(baby days)...I enjoyed this... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/9/2003 |
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Fun write! Glad you had a big burp! Heehee!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/9/2003 |
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| HA! amusingly funny write; and we ALL burp from time to time; it's just a part of being human! *BURRRRRrrruuuppPPP* SORry; exCUUUUUSE me! had a good cold soda, too! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/9/2003 |
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LOLOLOL
(((grady)))
we all do it *burrrp* exCUSE me! me, too...just swigged a soda *it was gooooood*
adorable write...enjoyed very much
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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