by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Monday, June 09, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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excuse my rudeness please
I'm not really a sleaz
Been drinking soda pop
drank too much
so I got to get back in touch
before I become a fatality
Being too greedy
chowing too speedy
is so good
Sorry for the rudeness
It's just part of this greedy madness
There it goes again
Hell, I just can't win
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Have you ever tried to say Bulloowayhoo as you burp???
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
You can write about anything.
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|humbling experience...especially when the sophisticates let go a loud one....embarrassing moments, unless you don't care...we aLL burp...remember when it was a necessary part of our days....(baby days)...I enjoyed this...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Fun write! Glad you had a big burp! Heehee!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|HA! amusingly funny write; and we ALL burp from time to time; it's just a part of being human! *BURRRRRrrruuuppPPP* SORry; exCUUUUUSE me! had a good cold soda, too! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
we all do it *burrrp* exCUSE me! me, too...just swigged a soda *it was gooooood*
adorable write...enjoyed very much
(((HUGS))) and love,