|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Reading your words is like watching a sunset changing the sky to verragated shades and hues of color...
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Love cerulean blue...and this poem, Sara. -gene.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very nicely done Sara...this speaks so much on love and relationships.
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|Sounds like you have a good relationship and this poem paints a fine canvas of your journey together. Some fine lines like:"Oil based ochre
And cerulean blue..." And a GREAT TITLE! Enjoy the journey...
Later, michael guy
|Reviewed by A PAX
this is my favorite of yours!!!
This is gentle, but has a trippy flavor.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|powerful write! totally encompassing...|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|"A nuclear fusion
Pushing our sails further out into an unexplored space
Hydrogen converts into lofty helium aspirations
As we drift in and out of trust
But always still finding us"
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
This Is Better Than All !
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This one is a real beauty , the combo with art is very wonderful!|
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Beautiful. Love this poem. Sounds positive to me and I hope and pray something positive has happened to you and the love of your life. Love. S.|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|"...As we drift in and out of trust..."
Oh, my dear - what a superb line that is! Love the poem, but honest to god, that line will linger in my mind for days.
|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik
|You have ,it seems to me,examined a relationship very well without reducing the whole affair to cold analysis. The resulting wormth is almost palpable, the metaphors almost visible things.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wonderful write filled with tenderness!!
|Lovely heart felt write, Sara! You're much to nice to feel pain!
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|Nice write, but that picture is much too large. :o)|