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  Still Finding Us
by Sara Coslett
Monday, June 09, 2003
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As the light dims…

The adventure we created

Slowly fades away.

Oh life…it is so dear;

A revere, a beautiful union

Layering on bold strokes

Brushed across a canvas

Of our exploration,

Still lingering wet with

Oil based ochre

And cerulean blue;

Spiriting our ambitions

Oxygen inflamed billows

Like raging wildfires.

 

You, loving me;

Me, loving you.

Just faded glory

creeping along the border

of what could be.

 

But there in the center,

Like every new day

A nuclear fusion bursts forth.

Pushing our sails further out

Into an unexplored space,

Where hydrogen converts

Into lofty helium aspirations,

As we drift in and out of trust…

But always still finding us.

 

 

 

Copyright 2003 Sara Coslett

 




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Reviewed by Cryssa C 11/17/2008
Reading your words is like watching a sunset changing the sky to verragated shades and hues of color...

Cryssa
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 11/15/2008
Love cerulean blue...and this poem, Sara. -gene.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 11/15/2008
Very nicely done Sara...this speaks so much on love and relationships.

Fee
Reviewed by Michael Guy 11/14/2008
Sounds like you have a good relationship and this poem paints a fine canvas of your journey together. Some fine lines like:"Oil based ochre
And cerulean blue..." And a GREAT TITLE! Enjoy the journey...
Later, michael guy
Reviewed by A PAX 6/11/2003
Bravo!!!
this is my favorite of yours!!!
This is gentle, but has a trippy flavor.
pax
Anita
:)
Reviewed by jude forese 6/11/2003
powerful write! totally encompassing...
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 6/10/2003
"A nuclear fusion
Bursts forth
Pushing our sails further out into an unexplored space
Hydrogen converts into lofty helium aspirations
As we drift in and out of trust
But always still finding us"
Wonderful writing!!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 6/10/2003
6-11-03

This Is Better Than All !

TRASK
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/10/2003
This one is a real beauty , the combo with art is very wonderful!
Reviewed by serenety L 6/10/2003
Beautiful. Love this poem. Sounds positive to me and I hope and pray something positive has happened to you and the love of your life. Love. S.
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes 6/10/2003
"...As we drift in and out of trust..."

Oh, my dear - what a superb line that is! Love the poem, but honest to god, that line will linger in my mind for days.
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader) 6/10/2003
You have ,it seems to me,examined a relationship very well without reducing the whole affair to cold analysis. The resulting wormth is almost palpable, the metaphors almost visible things.

Adam
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/10/2003
Wonderful write filled with tenderness!!
Love
tinka
Reviewed by 6/9/2003
Lovely heart felt write, Sara! You're much to nice to feel pain!


tony:)
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 6/9/2003
Nice write, but that picture is much too large. :o)

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