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HaHaHeHe
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Tuesday, June 10, 2003
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(The little brown jug, use to have me sitting in a pub.) |
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Haha
Hehe
Little brown jug you use to be
All for me
HaHa
Hehe
Little brown jug I disagree
Haha
Hehe
Can't you see
That I'm now free
Haha
Hehe
Get your little brown butt away from me
(fifteen years alcohol free)
GEM
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/10/2003 |
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| Hey you deserve to celebrate! Fantastic accomplishment! You should write about it in more detail some day!Bravo GEm!!! |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/10/2003 |
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Good For You, Grady! I enjoyed this funny write!!
tony |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/10/2003 |
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| courageous write; glad you are sober, my friend! stay true to your sobriety and you will go far! :) i am proud of you! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :) |
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