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|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Fantastic write, deeply insightful, with a wonderfully rewarding ending (or should I say "beginning")!!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|Jaqueline, this is a very upbeat statement of hope and the ability of one to come back and live the life they create. It can be done, as you obviously know. When it isn't done, serial killers can be created, too. Please read my Long Gone Love, Willow, Old Souls and Journey. Also my story, very short- The One That Got Away. Give me some feedback, please. You will enjoy them, I promise you. Thanks- Jerry|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the environ of a child has a lot to do with its developement...|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|I'm glad these two people found each other ... fate was kind!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
this started out so sad, but wound up so hopeful...well done
"...you were doomed, you know
to meet me
to be loved unconditionally
wanted, needed and appreciated for who you are
never to look back on what was, but on what will be
and without a doubt...
spend the rest of your life with me"
(((HUGS))) and love,
*although i'm not a bastard child, i've felt those feelings myself...doomed to be a failure, having to prove myself again and again to a family that doesn't appreciate me for who i am--this touched my soul, and will be added to my library to read again and again*