The Swing
by Priyanka N Kapadia
Friday, June 13, 2003
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Tiny tots, little lads,
Swinging merrily, high up in the air,
No hurry, no worry, not a moment’s care.
Oblivious to current fads,
Yes indeed! This is their world,
The merriment, the laughter, the innocence, their golden hair curled.
While they enjoy this to and fro, this high and low,
Sincerely, truthfully, willingly following the swing’s oscillation,
Worry entraps me and I hope not they lose direction in this oscillatory motion,
Or just merely go with the flow,
For there will be obstacles to surmount,
And battles to be won, when they will be in the world, out
And not always will the swing’s speed match theirs.
Yet, I want to protect them forever,
But that will mean controlling the swing’s lever,
But control and protection will only make undone lessons and experiences of their later years.
So I decide to let their swing oscillate, undisturbed, uninterrupted,
And wait and watch these tiny tots, confident and talented,
But I only wish for their swing to rise higher and higher,
Swinging merrily, high up in the air,
Where the ones who reach, are rare.
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| Reviewed by Sheece |
7/16/2003 |
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| I can see that your heart bleeds for childhood, so much so that you don't mind the occasional fall. Its very well crafted and a pleasure to read. You write from the heart. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/13/2003 |
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| Well said.... |
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| Reviewed by Amit Srivastava |
6/13/2003 |
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nice priyanka,
beautiful words these are |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
6/13/2003 |
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| This is good write...BHUWAN!!! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/13/2003 |
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| Priyanka, very well done. Best to watch and guide them. Hoping our influences stere them in the right direction. |
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