Raising Some Hell In Louisiana
by David Lester Young
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Crystal clear notes,
the heartís tune,
rhythmic inner emotions,
moving the soul.
get down blues.
feel those hormones,
set me on fire
in body gyrations.
Shake those walls,
rattles the bones,
raise the dead,
spirits are wailing,
the ghosts are dancing.
Sweat that music out
feeling so alive
move that body
for the band is
raising some hell,
Somewhere in America not on company time 06/11/03
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|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent flow and celebration...|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
|ooo daddyoooo........dig that crazy beat.
loved the rhythm throughout this.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was great! Just excellent!
|Reviewed by Handsum-Hart
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|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful emotions indeed, David!....flows well and with good rhythm! I enjoyed this!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Hot and sweaty. The way I like it.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Yup...you got it. Well done. Nice rhythm.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i've been there WHOOOOOO laissez les bon temps rouler! :) (let the good times roll)
visually stimulating, the short sentences bring a rhythmic flow that is hard to resist. well done! *applause*
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|good write! :) (((HUGS)))|