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Raising Some Hell In Louisiana
by David Lester Young

Sunday, June 15, 2003

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Storming jazz,
beating rain,
blues skies
feeling pain.

Thundering drums,
trumpeting breezes,
steamy clarinet,
saxophone wailing,
swirling minds,
orchestrated harmony,
singing blue.

Crystal clear notes,
the heartís tune,
rhythmic inner emotions,
moving the soul.

Fireplace warmth,
steamy love,
vibrating notes,
get down blues.

Sweet mama,
feel those hormones,
sweet vixen
set me on fire
in body gyrations.

Shake those walls,
rattles the bones,
raise the dead,
spirits are wailing,
the ghosts are dancing.

Sweat that music out
feeling so alive
move that body
for the band is
raising some hell,
in Louisiana.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 06/11/03

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Reviewed by jude forese 6/16/2003
excellent flow and celebration...
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 6/16/2003
ooo daddyoooo........dig that crazy beat.
loved the rhythm throughout this.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/15/2003
This was great! Just excellent!

Reviewed by Handsum-Hart 6/15/2003
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Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/15/2003
Wonderful emotions indeed, David!....flows well and with good rhythm! I enjoyed this!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/15/2003
Hot and sweaty. The way I like it.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 6/15/2003 got it. Well done. Nice rhythm.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/15/2003

i've been there WHOOOOOO laissez les bon temps rouler! :) (let the good times roll)

visually stimulating, the short sentences bring a rhythmic flow that is hard to resist. well done! *applause*

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/15/2003
good write! :) (((HUGS)))
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