|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|..here at authorsden we are so fortunate to have one another , sharing our innerness, knowing that there will be no judgment no malace..just understanding and love..I take this opportunity in thanking the author for her wondrous part in this...our gathering.
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|very romantic poem Gwen with a haunting touch at the end.....well written!|
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|Beautiful write, Gwen..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This was excellent!!|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Yikes! From passion, to departure, to waiting, to knowing, and that final kiss, almost chilling as it signifies the loss of all, Gwen! Just read your bio, it reads alot like me, aching to always show the reader the next hill, the further flight of a crow or the feel of traveling the path with an open mind and inquisitive soul! :) You have a lovely soul, Gwen.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh, This was excellent! I loved it!
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A haunting write, Gwen. So well done. Love comes in so many forms and it can only be measured in its intensity and passion when it is relayed in dreams and thoughts.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Gwen this is astounding awesome work!!!!
|Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
|Gwen, you have done a very good job with this one. The last line is a total surprise. Very few poets in English used this technique, known as bathos, the most famous one of them is John Donne. Romance + wit!!|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Beautiful poem of an eternal love!
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|Spirits joined to the end this was so touching and leaves you wanting more|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|OMG!!! LOVE THIS!!!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Love from the other side? He really did keep his vow Gwen. Isn't it stange though sometimes when we make a promise to someone or they make one to us ... we get a funny feeling inside our hearts ... like the promise will never be kept. But maybe it is kept ... but we are just not open enough to know it. What a wonderful poem! Bill|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|An excellent write Gwen!
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
As always, Wonderfully Written!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|VEry very good write...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
This was a good one!
Best to keep your electric blanket set on high for his return visit .If he gives you
cold lips you give him the cold shoulder.
Spooky yarn....made me smile.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Mercy, that was chillingly good and eternally romantic. Love it.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
So,So Romantically You!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Being familiar with vows (grin) I liked this a lot.|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Wow!! Very nice!
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|This blew my mind in so short a time excellent trembling it gave me job well done !|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A chilling write, and I was so happy at first;-)not many keep vows...Good one Gwen!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I like the idea.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|awwww, geez, gwen, *shivers* this is a scary, intense, creepy write...gonna have nightmares tonight! well done, dear...
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :0 *shivers*