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Titanium Heart (Dedicated to Karla Dorman)
by Amor Sabor

Wednesday, June 18, 2003

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I am immobilized by the titanium of her resolve
that heart that she possesses to overcome all
I watch her movements filled with a greased pain
knowing well the caress of her crystalline soul
She longs from the sill of a weathered window
as the creator has tested her with tribulation
Yet she sets eyes firmly in the distant horizon
and keeps dreams in a treasure chest of faith
while determined to cross an unfamiliar bridge
Her beauty is not just delegated to the surface
but also to that child that lives eternally within
deep beneath the skin of an embattled heart
Strong but never cold to an appreciative touch
She sees me in flight from rooftop to rooftop
like a welcomed raven with a prism for eyes
beyond crossroads leading to green pastures
and through dark clouds that loom overhead
She spins tales of the reflections in the mirror
of the defenseless and those without means
extending her hand to downtrodden strangers
with the pure love that was born in her house
She finds rainbows in the midst of tornadoes
and sheds real tears of compassion and joy
She surrounds me with an extended warmth
to share unhesitatingly the joy in her heart
and I can know the patience and frustration
and I can know the sweet sorrow and pain
and feel true security in the arms of her love
the moment that I enter her titanium heart
She brings me much closer to her front door
where I can arrive and listen to her whispers
so that I can see clearer through her eyes
and there intermix her dreams with mine

© 2003 Amor Sabor

*Dedicated to Karla Dorman for she stretches the little time that she has in dedicating herself to an outside world and writing of the sometimes painful reminders of our society from her view within. She exemplifies genuine hospitality through an outstreched hand of friendship.

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 12/14/2007
I've had the pleasure of reviewing some of Karla's work. She is very deserving of this tribute. I like the tone of this piece - quite different from your other tributes. This one focuses on the heart within. Well done, Amor! -Sheila
Reviewed by Poetry Deborah 3/9/2004
Amor, this is absolutely stunning. What a wonderful tribute to someone who is such a good friend to all. Well spoken, well written. Bravo!

God bless...
Reviewed by karla dorman 8/20/2003

*tears* o, this is beautiful

i don't see myself this way at all...but thank you

i am honored beyond measure, and shall treasure this forever in my heart

(((HUGS))) and much love,

karla. :(

i think my favorite line of this beauty is

"...she finds rainbows in the midst of tornadoes..."

i try to go on through the storms life throws at me...that's all i can do

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 6/26/2003
Damn it do these so are every Womans dream and Gigi's reality!! ;) Fantastic writing..Amor. Thanks, Dani
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 6/20/2003
Another perfect tribute tp an angel of a soul!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 6/19/2003
Amor this is a Fantastic Tribute Write for one of the den's trully Fantastic people!!!! How touching, you made me tear here Amor!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 6/19/2003
Wonderful tribute to a lady with a heart of gold.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 6/19/2003
This has made me weep , it's so beautifully written and captures the very essence of Karla. She needed this very much at this time and I doubt anyone could have given her a greater gift. She is a very special lady as is her sister Karen.You have a very good heart.
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 6/19/2003
Amor i have read a number of these tributes and all of them are excellent.
Karla is such a gem and her heart is as you have painted here.
Bless you Amor
I can't wait to see your tribute to the Princess.
If you are planning on doing one can you email me since I don't get here much
Thank you Ed
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/18/2003
Amor, always the master choosing for Karla such a beautiful expression of her personality...exceptional !
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 6/18/2003
A truly wonderful tribute to a beautiful soul. Excellent write. ~Trish~
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 6/18/2003
Amazing and gracious write from a writer with a beautiful soul, Amor! You've captured Karla's essence, showed us her strengths, and weaknesses, and painted her portrait in your lovely, heart-felt words. It was a joy to read your tribute and know the person behind the write. :) Exceptional work!!
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/18/2003
good one
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/18/2003
Amor, I agree with you. Karla has a real good heart, filled with beauty, love and compassion. Wonderful write for a lovely lady!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/18/2003
This was a beautiful and lovely tribute to Karla, excellent!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 6/18/2003
Amor, this is such a lovely tribute to Karla.
She is truly a gem
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 6/18/2003
Amor, this is a beautiful dedication to a beautiful lady!!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/18/2003
A perfect dedication to a darling of the Den Amor!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 6/18/2003
You've certainly captured her courage. The wonderful friendships both ladies have forged are their 'loving' family. That's all anyone needs, especially if they don't have immediate family that loves them. God fills in gaps. Beautifully done, Amor.
Reviewed by Dove (Reader) 6/18/2003
Oh, so sweet!! Your angels do whisper to you to heal others!!I am sure she will be so happy to see this precious gift of tribute, for I love her so very much..You've penned it so well about her compassion, her heart, her struggles with challenges...A precious light you are..

Dove ~
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 6/18/2003
What a wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady! I love your phrases, especially:

"Yet she sets eyes firmly in the distant horizon
and keeps dreams in a treasure chest of faith"

"She finds rainbows in the midst of tornadoes"

Well done, Amor!
Reviewed by A PAX 6/18/2003

Yet she sets eyes firmly in the distant horizon
and keeps dreams in a treasure chest of faith

A wonderfullllllllllllllllllll tribute to such a sweet soul!!!
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 6/18/2003
What a write this is, about a very beautiful soul! She is a gift to everyone!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/18/2003
(((amor)))) you are an angel, and this heartfelt write about my twin sister has really touched me more than you will ever know. she is sorry for not posting a review underneath her name, but she saw the poem, and she got so excited, she hit the enter key first before she could get her review in! OOPS! :) check your message board; there you will find her response. anyway, amor..we both love this beautiful write! thank you again! ((((HUGS)))) and love, your friend in texas, 1/2 of the texas twin dynamic duo, karen lynn. :)
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 6/18/2003
This is beautiful. A perfect dedication to a darling of the Den.
Way to Go, Amor!
Jill :)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 6/18/2003
Amor this one has me weeping, how beautiful, for such a beautiful lady.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/18/2003
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