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Quicksand of heart
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Friday, June 20, 2003

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Love is a mansion
Build over the quicksand of heart
So diminish your arrogance and sprinkle
The perfume of compassion and solidarity to all
For love is ephemeral and you might sink
Like the waterlogged boat in the ocean of time
Upon the advent of autonomous flood
If you don’t have friends to drag you back
Into the safety of the land and assist you
To build again the mansion of love
Over the stable rock of conscientious love

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) 6/26/2003
There is so much truth to this! An intelligent and thought-provoking poem! Great write!
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 6/23/2003
this is very meaningful
Reviewed by serenety L 6/22/2003
A beautiful image you painted with those words ......a mansion built over the quicksand of heart. So true and wise.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 6/22/2003
Thought provoking write!
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 6/22/2003
Sweet and wise, Bhuwan! :)
Reviewed by jude forese 6/21/2003
excellent write bro'
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/21/2003
Your works is always profound in its beauty, bravo Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 6/21/2003
Superb once again Buwan...and such wisdom once again too!!!!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 6/21/2003
Your writing is amazing Bhuwan!

Are you published? I'm thinking you simply must be....

Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/21/2003
So Beautiful and wise, as always, A pleasure to read your excellent poetry,

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn 6/21/2003
I'll toss you a rope to some stable ground. Love N Luck! Excellent!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/21/2003
wise write, o bhuwan; enjoyed!~ (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 6/21/2003
GM, Bhuwan
Excellent Write, Master of Wisdom!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 6/21/2003
Whoa, this is profound....excellent Bhuwan....
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ 6/21/2003
Yes, compassion is a key and we must love conscientiously! Outstanding write Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Christine Morell 6/21/2003
Excellent and enjoyable, as always
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/21/2003
Weeeeeeewww!! this is a gooooooood one Bhuwan!!!
I thinka I'm in troubla!!

Reviewed by ruby singh (Reader) 6/21/2003
I so agree with u on the role played by friends.....gr8 work.
Reviewed by Gopal Prd.Bhusal 6/21/2003
What a pleasent ,meaningful& touching. Congratulation Mr.Bhuwan for your poems. Hope you will be able to present more and more in the future. Please do not stop just go a head. I wish you to be on the top
Reviewed by Dove (Reader) 6/21/2003
What wisdom you share, my friend!!

Reviewed by na na (Reader) 6/21/2003
You are so right Bhuwan ... for love to survive it needs a solid and stable foundation. What an excellent author you are. Your friend Bill
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/21/2003
excellent write my friend
as always

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 6/21/2003
Wonderful thoughts, Bhuwan! Your poems are always comforting and thought provoking!
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