|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Terrific write, Paul!|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Oh I agree, with bells on. Fantastic advice, and fantastic write.
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|You know I have a thing for great rhyme....and you Sir do it so very well...this poem is.. as always... simply perfect ...ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Take a bow, THIS is advice I should listen to, ..... I always give better advice than what I take... THEN it comes down to that old saying "Practice what you preach"...an endless circle of advice :) Very well penned. Liked the thought process.
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Bravo. Well said. We will follow your advise.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|I'd say this is a good mouthful and good advice Paul, not to mention a good laY OUT. g|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|You met the challenge well, excellent poem, great advice!|
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage
|You excelled at the challenge, dear lady.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You have the right in my book! Excellent work Paul!|
|Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
|Well done..Your use and advice of the word are well taken..michael|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|When I pop in, yours is the first name I scan for...and poetry like this is why. Excellent work, Paul...as always.|
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|Paul, this sounds like good advice to me. You said it well!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Paul, I agree with the other comments made on your poem. Your savvy is excellent! Delivered with flair. Bill|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Great job...wonderful rhyme.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent, I think you wrote perfectly wonderful verses here!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Love the rhyme and the message, Paul. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Precision with savvy remain but a high,
bountiful blessings bestowed with a sigh.
Treasures and wealth are not given away,
they are earned with knowledge I give here today.
Men in life, who have answered the call,
understand what it means to have nothing at all.
Shrewdly and wisely they follow a plan,
never lost in dreams of making a stand.
I would take your advice anyday.. This is superb!!!
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You done good for a novice advisor.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Wise and savvy!|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|It's savvy for sure. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is excellent write with a great message within!!
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A poem with a great message. Great write!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|This is very very excellent write...thank u....BHUWAN|