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| Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) |
6/30/2003 |
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| Wow. This really hits hard.. Well done.. Expressed perfectly.. michael |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
6/30/2003 |
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| Linda....clap clap clap....great write my friend....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
6/29/2003 |
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A lonely feeling, all right. Good poem, Linda.
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
6/29/2003 |
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This moves me deeply, I relate to it closely. Excellent, Linda
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
6/29/2003 |
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| real emotions I sense in your poem here, I enjoyed this |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
6/29/2003 |
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| So heartfelt and true. Fine poem. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/29/2003 |
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| raw and emotive write, linda; you do these so well! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/29/2003 |
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| may be time for a prison break... powerful emotions... |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
6/29/2003 |
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Wow Linda.
A difficult poem indeed, but captures so well what too many of us experience.
May liberation come in time.
Love will set you free.
Awesome poetry.
John |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/29/2003 |
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This invisible prison chokes us always. Good write Linda!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/29/2003 |
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Beautiful poem filed with raw emotion Linda!!
I think I know the feeling!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
6/29/2003 |
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I've been there, and yes, there is an invisible prison...no different than a visible one, huh? Stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/29/2003 |
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Linda,
This one I can relate to for
I lived in that prison for many months almost
a year and then I gaveup. But in giving up
I found my freedom and the timing and carrier of his love was so much more rewarding than
what I almost settled for.
It is never ever not possible. But the time in prison is impossible I know and this one carries the lonliness of that captivaty to heart.
Excellent piece...
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/29/2003 |
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| Cut to the heart, beautiful poem of raw emotion. Nothing is ever completely impossible. |
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