by Fawn E Caldwell
Monday, June 30, 2003
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I was watching a music video on MTV and this is what the singer reminded me of.
He moves like a broken marionette,
and the puppeteer knows not of this yet.
There's a string or two that's come undone,
he wanders wildly…as if on the run.
His conduct appears a might bit strange,
as if he's dancing on a hot range.
He shows no emotion with his funny smile,
as he looks straight through you all the while.
He taps out a dance that he knows is his last,
and he'll cry a lone tear for the upcoming cast.
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|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|LOL at e's comment.."good work. they are ALL strange on MTV". yep, e, you nailed it right on the head! LOL as for YOU, fawn, this was a good write; enjoyed!~ love, your new texas friend, karen lynn. :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...His conduct appears a might bit strange,
as if he's dancing on a hot range..."
Good work. They are ALL strange on MTV.