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  Tears In My Throat
by Sara Coslett
Tuesday, July 01, 2003


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I can hear you lay down on the bed
As you play hotel room blues again
You stretch your body out
And tell me
You are so happy that I called
In that soft gentle voice
You ask me not to worry so much
That you’re okay
We’re okay
And I feel like the whole world just
Stopped
I can’t breathe
Tears are welling up in my throat
I don’t know how tears get in my throat
But there they are
As I try to reply
“Thank you”



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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

CAUSE THERE JERKS is why! BEcause you deserve BETTER is why! Very throbbing emotions and you've smacked them perfectly!

Emilie
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Could feel the pain in this one. Outstanding write.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
So Beautiful and so sad, touched me so this morning,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
I like the tears in the throat.......... peace
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You describe it so well, gives me shivers...
Reviewed by Ghuffran Ullah (Reader)
Exactly ... yes the villian can be the star ... that is why it is how well you play it. Beautiful. They do have a funny way do they not these things we call tears of displaying every emotion possible?
Reviewed by serenety L
I also have tears in my throat when reading this.
Give him the love he needs and deserves !
Nico
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Sara,
This is very poignant and I know this feeling you express so well.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Very soulful, hon. {{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
It sounds like he is just reciting platitudes and you are concerned with important truths. Is that why the tears are welling up? Pherhaps I'm missing something.

Adam
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
sad write, but well done! (((HUGS))) :)
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