|Reviewed by Lee Garrett
|A very good first effort. The imagery is strong, the vision tight, and focused. I enjoyed it. There's a "Teach Yourself" book on writing Erotica that might interest you. It's by Mike Bailey, released through NTC Publishing Group. I've found it very helpful myself. You might like to check it out.|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
The form and content are excellent in this!
This is being marked as one of my favorites by you, so soft and sensual, yet filled with the fun of romance and love also!
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
this poem ignites a fuse.
wonderful write, karla
|Reviewed by m w
|:) Karla, make it so - I will be thinking of this piece as the fireworks burst overhead on the 4th|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wonderful toasty write. :)|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was wonderful, That was some 4th of July! I loved it!
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|Hot write about a hot night :-) I hope it doesn't rain on the 4th|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|hey I like this...was your feet cold??
|Reviewed by tiffany
|it's not bad for a first attempt.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Karla this is wonderful, softly sensual but hot.|
|Reviewed by Donna Maris
|Whewwwhooo..Finally- we have ignition and LIFT OFF!! =) EXCELLENT!..Im glad you were inspired to write from reading my work..=)
now you know why Belle calls me SpiceGirl =)
sure you don't have red hot jeans, too? Donna
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Most Interestingly so Hot!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|WOW WOW!Karla, how beautiful! you surprised me with the fancy fireworks;-)A really sweet touching poem with exciting finale!|
|Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
|Here's to the "up coming" holiday.......this poem rocks too.|
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Wow!! Great write.. You should write more..
Happy 4th of July!! *wink*
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|Mmmmmmmboy! Loved this bit of erotica.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|wow! not bad for a first attempt; this is great! could see the fireworks goin' off in my mind as i read this passion-filled write! gret job! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :)|