|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1
|Scary how this seems to apply to how I've felt!
-- the last three stanza brought pure chills to my bones ....
Anmyway, great poem!
|Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
|I can feel the knife bury deep.. This does rock.. I t rocks the Very well done..michael|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Excellent, well expressed, you touched me here so deeply,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well written.!!|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... hold on to that thought; life abounds at the feet of a free spirit.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|The strength of your spirit shines through this Melissa!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Melissa, outstanding poem. It is always tough to awake with oneself.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Excellent poem Melissa.....Damn how I hate that feeling you so beautifully describe...Thanks, Dani|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|And so it goes.....|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Oh, the pain! So well expressed!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|ouch! Great write!|