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Sailing On A Sinking Ship
by Jenni Kalicharan

Thursday, July 03, 2003

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Sailing this ocean with no fixed course in mind,

Not knowing what my final destination will be.

Braving the winds and the torrid rains,

As I journey upon this wide open sea.


Sailing this ocean for quite a long time,

Yet I知 no closer to your heart,

But the one thing that I知 certain of,

Is that we値l never be anything but apart.


Many a night I致e been tempted to dock,

To shelter from the turbulent rain.

But this journey has been quite pleasant so far,

And there hasn稚 been too much pain.


So aboard this sinking ship I値l stay,

Hoping that maybe one day soon,

I値l find my way into a small corner of your heart

With the help of the silvery moon.


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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/5/2003
my favourite of yours!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/4/2003
Wish you luck. Great write.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/4/2003
"So aboard this sinking ship I値l stay,
Hoping that maybe one day soon,
I値l find my way into a small corner of your heart
With the help of the silvery moon."
This is so profound...what else can we do... beautiful...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/4/2003
This is now perhaps my favourite of yours and added to my library. It's absolutely beautiful, every line.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 7/4/2003
Beautifully done, Jenni.
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/4/2003
most enjoyable
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/3/2003
Beautiful, so wonderful, I loved this excellent poem!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/3/2003
This is exquisite Jeni, so romantic and longing.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/3/2003
Jennie, this is absolutely beautiful. Every line is a gem. Bravo.
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