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| Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader) |
7/13/2003 |
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of Man’s need to self-proclaim,
and expound individual realities.
THE CAESURA COMES HERE!
As it should be, in the wonder of Being.
She marvels at compassion’s strength,
its selfless, sensitive grace, its purity of form,
This poem really hits home emotionally and in its heart-felt empathy for humankind, not as a generic blob, but as individuals struggling to live and to LOVE...
.... to reach beyond the selfish I (eye)
Richard
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/7/2003 |
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| Lovely, Erin:) |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/7/2003 |
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| Let me add my name to this growing list of admirers. Your prose wass just magnificant and each thought was a jewel. I like you I think. |
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| Reviewed by The Voice (Reader) |
7/6/2003 |
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Never before has a greater Thank You been express so sweetly. It is us who should be thanking you for sharing your talents with us.
Hugs,
The Voice
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
7/6/2003 |
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| You dear Lady are a fine poet and your ideas are deep and well thought out. I envy your words skills and wish to emulate you. But it is hard to be another beside yourself, isn't it. Great work Erin. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
7/6/2003 |
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{{{Erin}}}
This piece just like all your others is a real pleasure to read! Excellant Work! You will always have my compassion and understanding!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
7/6/2003 |
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| Enjoyed this so much, wonderful write. |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
7/6/2003 |
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Excellent write, Erin. Even the anticipation of writing gets the creative juices flowing. Well said and done.
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
7/6/2003 |
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A fantastic, thoughtful piece, Erin. you're writing is always outstanding.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
7/6/2003 |
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ERIN.. MOST EXCELLENT..
And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose,
explaining her minds heartbeat,
BRAVO
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Spirit.
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
7/6/2003 |
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Excellent, Erin....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
7/6/2003 |
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| .."her minds heartbeat..." <--- a phrase of unique, poetic beauty. Erin, this is a feast for the reader.. I devoured it twice.. I couldn't help myself. You've expressed our thoughts.. eloquently and with your usual grace. I love the way you think.. and feel! Superb! love, katy. |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
7/6/2003 |
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Erin,
This is fresh, pure and honest. Thank You!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/6/2003 |
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A wonderful write with depth Erin!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
7/6/2003 |
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“Subjectivity: A Thank You…” It bears a deep message.
This poem is from the womb of the soul and delivered by a
Heart that pumps knowledge from the Universe.
“Subjectivity: A Thank You…” was poemized with six hundred and
sixty eight letters in one hundred and twenty five words into one
STANZA POEM with twenty-four lines that tells us the humanity of
the soul and the divinity of the heart.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/6/2003 |
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| your spirit soars! excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
7/6/2003 |
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| This is wonderful write with depth....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
7/5/2003 |
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{{{Erin}}}
this is so wonderfuly writen..! I have made a decision to leave AD for good starting with my membership over with at midnight...I thank you so very, very much for all your beautiful healing words you placed upon my spirit when I needed it..You are a rare flower so glorious an speacial..If you want to stay in touch contact me through doves healing world .com
Love you,
Dove |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
7/5/2003 |
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| Love it..... |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
7/5/2003 |
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Thank YOU Erin.
You poetry is always so lush with depth and unique thought...Gotta love ya!
Dani |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
7/5/2003 |
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| Beautiful! You express yourself in style! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/5/2003 |
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| Beautifully expressed in your unique and lovely style! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/5/2003 |
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| Fantastic write! |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
7/5/2003 |
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Very nice Erin!!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
7/5/2003 |
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Erin,
Thank you for your poetry, compassion and friendship.
"And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose
and explain her minds heartbeat,
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Soul. "
excellent piece.
Peg
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