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Rain
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

Sunday, July 06, 2003

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Hello everyone. Life has it's ups and downs? I'm trying to get back here with you wonderful people in time. Too much to do that is urgent. Much love from me...Ron.


Rain is now falling in place

some rain got misplaced

it fell on my face

such a waste?



Ron Axelson
©7/6/03
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Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 7/18/2003
So the rain is now placed after being misplaced by falling on your face?
Everything straight now? Well I'm glad, but wasted? nah...not if it woke you.

Nice poem Ron
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 7/11/2003
Hope you weather the storms. :)
Reviewed by Dove (Reader) 7/11/2003
Love to you..Yes, I missed you..

Love, Dove
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) 7/11/2003
I hear this one well...This is wonderfull. Short sweet to the point. michael
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/10/2003
wow....lovely write...BHUWAN
Reviewed by William Bonilla 7/10/2003
ITS A GREAT TIME TO WRITE WHEN IT RAINS

WILLIAM
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 7/10/2003
Rain rain go away
Let Ron come back to play...

hey hey...cuzz you are missed...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/7/2003
Cute, I liked this!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme 7/7/2003
Hi Ron - I wondered about you. Now I know - you've been out in the rain. Dry yourself off and come back in! ;0)
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 7/7/2003
Hope you get back very soon Ron. You are missed by many. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/7/2003
(((ron)))

the tears you feel
are ones we're crying
'cause you're not here
*hurry back* we're sighing :)

bad poem...but the right thoughts are there

YOUR poem and drawing, on the other hand...OUTSTANDING

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

you ARE missed!!!!!
Reviewed by Linda Hill 7/7/2003
I miss you too, my friend..
Hurry back to the den!!!

~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 7/7/2003
Great sketch and nippy lines, but you know, umbrellas go over your head see....so thats why you keep getting wet...not that I thought this was a self portrait or anything......just digging myself out of this hole
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/7/2003
No waste!!!! And I like this, Ron...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/7/2003
glad to see you here again, sketchman; you have been missed here at the den! terrific write and art! :) (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/7/2003
Miss you Ron, great little verse.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 7/7/2003
Missing you, Sketchman...your friend, Sourpuss!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 7/7/2003
If only you could use hugs as umbrellas you would be fine as for sure old mate heaps of hugs being sent your way.
Best wishes always
from
your Aussie pal
Kay
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 7/7/2003
This made me laugh:))
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/7/2003
Sorry to learn the rain falls on your face. Please come back soon. Don't stay away for too long. You are missed.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 7/7/2003
Dearest Ron - We all have times when life on the home front calls us away.. How dare it do such a thing ( glares at life on the home front) ;)

Am so glad you checked in... Love ya sweetie..

Missing ya too..
Melanie
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 7/6/2003
Missed you Ron!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/6/2003
That was not rain that fell on your face!!
It's my tears that's falling like rain missing you on my page!!.....LOL!!
Very neat priceless write Ron!!

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 7/6/2003
Do what you have to do...and hurry back...Good to see you oh talented one....thanks, Dani
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 7/6/2003

Your sketches are something else! This kind of leaves the reader open. More! More! It's sad and it's not. Great job you have done with tangling emotions in few words.

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by jude forese 7/6/2003
at least you got cooled off ;)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/6/2003
Glad to see you, even if it is only once in a while. Take care. Nice little poem. Love it.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/6/2003
Hi Ron hon;-) So glad to see you, hope puters better, you too;-) love the sketch and rain;-) smoooooooooooooooooooooooch!
Reviewed by Nancy D. 7/6/2003
Your missed, but glad you stopped in.

Nancy
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/6/2003
Glad you could drop in :-) You are always missed!
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 7/6/2003
Cute, cute Ron.
Missed you, Vicky
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 7/6/2003
Glad to see you; you have indeed been missed. :o)
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