by Jim Brown
Monday, July 07, 2003
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for how long though
You're watching tv, all alone
All is quiet, suddenly ring! it's the phone
I'm watching you, watching tv
I see what you're doing, you don't see me
You're on your feet, looking all around
Looking for me, listening for sound
All you hear, is me on the phone
"I'll be right over", I know you're alone
You slam the phone down, running in fear
I've let myself in, I'm so very near
Still you see nothing, you hide in your room
I'll be right beside you, oh so very soon
I'm opening the door, you shiver by the chair
I'm lurking in the darkness, hear you breathing, crystal clear
Moving closer to you now, I see your face in shadowy light
Fear written all over it, I whisper, honey this is it, goodnight
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|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|<shiver> Eeew! I hate that, lol. I mean I like the poem but I hate that scenario. <shiver> This is why loneliness is one of my biggest fears... and windows! Good write!
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
You had me going as well...lol
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Short, but very good. :0)|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|You had my heart pounding, looking over my shoulder! Very well done. ~Z~|