|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
|Forgive me, Buwan, for stating the obvious.
The IMAGERY in this poem is both astute and lovely; so is the picture.
But you should try and get the poem's rhythms to match (they're a bit bumpy...)
I sense the lines are too long.
Perhaps recasting the poem in a few more lines, but each as a tetrameter might help.
Just a suggestion.
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Try making new good memories helping you forget any that haunt you. Excellent write!Love N Luck....
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very meaningful and wise write...|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Excellent write, with words of wisdom.
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Bravo Bhuwan! Excellent write and picture! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Bhuwan...short but deep and expressive. Memories returning over an over again. Dealing with them isn't easy is it? Your Friend Bill|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Bhuwan once again such EXCELLANT TRUTH and WISDOM...EXPERTISELY WRITTEN!!!!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Excellent piece, Bhuwan
|Reviewed by serenety L
|So true Bhuwan. Wise words.
All we can do is make sure we got enough good memories to "haunt" us.
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Oh this is just "AWESOME"
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh!! And some of those memories can be so good....and some very sad!!
This brought back some real heartfelt memories to me!!
Lovely thoughful write Bhuwan!!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Bhuwan, how true, so true, and they come back impromptu.... love this...
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful and Wise words, excellent,
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|A very truthful write. Beautiful!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A wonderful write my friend
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Wonderful poem and completely true!|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Some good and some bad, but you can't live a memory only create a new one. Excellent write!|
|Reviewed by anne cunningham
|can't shake memory. excellent piece and pairing of artwork. -a|
|Reviewed by David Knight
|We all have those memories that we'd prefer to be without, for differing reasons.
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra